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Think Of Me (Deep Song) Must Read.

Postby Steve Spag » Feb 14th, '08, 04:51

Alright, I wrote this track awhile back to a beat called "Scapegoat" by Shadowville Productions. You could find it on Soundclick if you go there. Just a track I made about me and my ex's situation and shit. I'm probably gonna record this sometime soon because it sounds really good on beat and is just another deep song from me, lol. Let me know what you think. I hope you get the right flow for it (the flow for the hook is really different).

Verse 1:
Do you think of me, when you're sittin' all alone?//
'Cause I think of you, I can't believe I let you go//
From time-to-time you just cross my brain//
It affects me deeply, all loss and shame//
Soap opera games, won't stop charades//
Hope options change your bossin' ways//
Don't walk away, don't mock today//
Don't block my name you little woppin' dame//
I hate to do this all the time, always bringing up the past//
I've harassed you enough, put your singing in a track//
I've laughed, in your face, and that, is just a trait//
That I picked up somewhere, sometime through hate//
I know, I'm a dick, I know, you're soo pissed//
I am sorry for everything I've put you through bitch//
My heart, has been widthdrawn, so start, to sing along//
If you've fallen for a woman and you're clinging on her arm//
It's wrong//

Hook:
So what you think of this?//
What you think about comittment? It just doesn't exsist//
Soo much trouble's gone by, have you realized at all?//
I don't wanna get hurt anymore//
So what you think of this?//
What you think about me and you? Should I even resist?//
I don't know what to say, what the fuck is going on?//
I've been misplaced and I don't wanna get hurt anymore//

Verse 2:
Will you think of me, when I am dead and I am gone?//
Will you miss me at all? Will you listen to my songs?//
There's a lot about you 'cause you're a part of my life//
Weather you like or you don't you are my art when I write//
And in spite of our differences, I'm tryin' to be nice//
There is no light in the distance, I am sick of advice//
So just get out of my sight, I ain't sayin' it twice//
What the fuck you expecting? I am playin' this right//
And here I go yet again, trash talkin' a girl//
Our relationship is pointless, it won't last in this world//
So I sit back and I hurl 'cause I am trapped like a pearl//
But I am breaking through the barrier, adapting to you girl//
I know, you're soo sick, of me, hello trick//
I ain't tryin' to be mean, but this shit ain't per-fect//
So where, do we go, from here? It ain't fair//
Don't get the wrong idea, 'cause bitch, I DO care//

Hook:
So what you think of this?//
What you think about comittment? It just doesn't exsist//
Soo much trouble's gone by, have you realized at all?//
I don't wanna get hurt anymore//
So what you think of this?//
What you think about me and you? Should I even resist?//
I don't know what to say, what the fuck is going on?//
I've been misplaced and I don't wanna get hurt anymore//

Verse 3:
Are you thinking of me yet? What do you think?//
Because I'd really like to know 'cause I ain't getting any sleep//
I'm awake through the night, thinkin' of your ass//
Just laying in my bed and I'm hoping it'll pass//
Yeah I'm kinda debating on which path to take//
Should I be staying with you? Is that a bad mistake?//
Should I really move along? Just forget your name?//
The pain is soo strong, someone set the flame//
I wish you'd change just a little, 'cause frankly you suck//
Can't talk about ANYTHING without a verbal buck//
You've struck, too many times, I've felt, soo much hurt//
I do, the same to you, I know, you are concerned//
I'm confused as fuck, I've abused your rep//
I am sorry for that, I've used you for raps//
I am looking for closure, this story is done//
Sincerely yours, the un-wanted one//

Hook:
So what you think of this?//
What you think about comittment? It just doesn't exsist//
Soo much trouble's gone by, have you realized at all?//
I don't wanna get hurt anymore//
So what you think of this?//
What you think about me and you? Should I even resist?//
I don't know what to say, what the fuck is going on?//
I've been misplaced and I don't wanna get hurt anymore//

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Re: Think Of Me (Deep Song) Must Read.

Postby Xray » Feb 14th, '08, 08:28

good read :b: but howcome you don't post songs in audio section?
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Re: Think Of Me (Deep Song) Must Read.

Postby Steve Spag » Feb 14th, '08, 08:38

Xray wrote:good read :b: but howcome you don't post songs in audio section?

Thanks a lot man, I appreciate it.

And the reason I don't post in the audio section is because I never have money to record anymore really. So all my shit is up on my soundclick page, and I got some tracks on my Myspace. Whenever I do come out with tracks though, I'll be sure to post 'em up there for sure.
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Re: Think Of Me (Deep Song) Must Read.

Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 14th, '08, 09:52

its pretty good, i just like it when u constantly use the same words
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Think Of Me (Deep Song) Must Read.

Postby Steve Spag » Feb 14th, '08, 17:42

Kaotic wrote:its pretty good, i just like it when u constantly use the same words

Thanks much.

Yeah I repeated some words in this to get a different feeling for the track. Some may not think it's "creative" enough, but I like the way it turned out. When it's on beat it sounds good, so in the long run, I'm happy with it, lol.
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Re: Think Of Me (Deep Song) Must Read.

Postby SajN » Feb 14th, '08, 17:58

a really great and deep song.
I like it :y: and yes, I got the flow.

"Will you think of me, when I am dead and I am gone?//
Will you miss me at all? Will you listen to my songs?//
There's a lot about you 'cause you're a part of my life//
Weather you like or you don't you are my art when I write//"

loved this part ^
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Re: Think Of Me (Deep Song) Must Read.

Postby Steve Spag » Feb 14th, '08, 18:57

NoN-Stop wrote:a really great and deep song.
I like it :y: and yes, I got the flow.

"Will you think of me, when I am dead and I am gone?//
Will you miss me at all? Will you listen to my songs?//
There's a lot about you 'cause you're a part of my life//
Weather you like or you don't you are my art when I write//"

loved this part ^

Thanks a lot bro, glad you liked that song there :).
I'll probably throw this on my next EP actually since I'm getting some good feed..
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Re: Think Of Me (Deep Song) Must Read.

Postby Xray » Feb 15th, '08, 06:58

Steve Spag wrote:
Xray wrote:good read :b: but howcome you don't post songs in audio section?

Thanks a lot man, I appreciate it.

And the reason I don't post in the audio section is because I never have money to record anymore really. So all my shit is up on my soundclick page, and I got some tracks on my Myspace. Whenever I do come out with tracks though, I'll be sure to post 'em up there for sure.

Hmm i see and btw i got a verses recorded on that beat also so if your down to colab and use that verse let me know cause i can tell you this its a nice verse i think you'll like it :y:
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Re: Think Of Me (Deep Song) Must Read.

Postby Xplode » Feb 15th, '08, 18:26

nice written man :) keep it up :y:
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Re: Think Of Me (Deep Song) Must Read.

Postby Arabian Shady » Feb 16th, '08, 16:55

awesome steve spag shit,haha
the flow was strong all the way thru,not sure i got it for the hook(pro'lly cause i havnt actually heard the song,aint evn gna bother downloadin it :) )but thats allrite,doesnt actually matter
couple bad ass rhymes n actually a wiked read
i usually dont read such long tracks-at all,but this was diff. i actualy enjoyed every bit man
keep it up :rock:
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Re: Think Of Me (Deep Song) Must Read.

Postby Steve Spag » Feb 17th, '08, 18:50

Arabian Shady wrote:awesome steve spag shit,haha
the flow was strong all the way thru,not sure i got it for the hook(pro'lly cause i havnt actually heard the song,aint evn gna bother downloadin it :) )but thats allrite,doesnt actually matter
couple bad ass rhymes n actually a wiked read
i usually dont read such long tracks-at all,but this was diff. i actualy enjoyed every bit man
keep it up :rock:
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Thanks a lot dude, I appreciate it. I'm glad you took the time to read this one, lol.
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Re: Think Of Me (Deep Song) Must Read.

Postby Crossova16 » Mar 2nd, '08, 22:46

i cant stop thinkin bout you, like your linked to me/
it aint a mystery, i know you dont think of me/
im praying and praying with this finger on the trigger b/
but it dont matter, dead or alive to you im invisible see/
im acting outta my mind bkuz im out of yours/
i have lost my mind so i need to get yours/
and plant my name in it like a bomb in a war/
but shit gets confusing, its like i see this door/
but i dnu if i shud walk out, so i just lay on the floor/
stare and think, till my mind sinks nd shrink/
and i aint gt a choice, but to let it out in ink/
and it hurts to look at all this, so i bleed when i blink/
BUT FUCK IT ALL! why shud i waste my time?/
why waste this remix? why waste my lines?
waste of rhymes? your just a waste of a mind/
kuz if you dont think of me, you shud juss face mah nine!/
SO tell me!...

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Re: Think Of Me (Deep Song) Must Read.

Postby Crossova16 » Mar 2nd, '08, 23:26

thats a remix verseee ....hit me up wid th0ughtzz
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Re: Think Of Me (Deep Song) Must Read.

Postby Epidemik » Mar 2nd, '08, 23:39

nice drop Steve Spag. sounds like you put some time into it..
lots of good lines.. good lyrics i liked it alot.
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Re: Think Of Me (Deep Song) Must Read.

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 2nd, '08, 23:54

nice steve yur rhymes are deep and persuasive

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