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is this good so far???

Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 16th, '08, 01:35

I welcome you all to my new album I call
"Kaotic's Got Flow", my number one topic's downfalls

and sometimes i will go off of the wall without punchlines to show
downward spirals I saw when I encountered devils

i got a mind and a soul so you won't find any holes
im smilin right now cuz tomorrow i already know

my freestyles will roll like eyeballs on radio
and only time really tells what I'm heading myself into...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: is this good so far???

Postby liljon » Feb 22nd, '08, 02:46

:n: :n: noo sorry
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Re: is this good so far???

Postby Robbie G » Feb 23rd, '08, 01:41

It was alright, but I liked some of your other stuff better.
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