You Don't wanna Lock Heads (Not Gangsta)

[notoriouS-K-M]

Kinda amatuer-ish, only my 2nd attempt at a song. I hit the writer's block with my 1st one & this just came to me. Go eazy on me.

Yo Yo People I gotta confess something

[Verse]

I'm a sick kid with a big dick
My fucked up mind made me rape a cat
I tried to loot a bank with a paper gat
The manager wouldn't give me the money
So I hit him over the head with a bat
Had a cab, ran away empty handed
Got to Talha's house & pretended
To be there all day & told him to pretend it
On my way to the gym, I saw a big titty chick
And I was tempted
But I held myself back & controlled my temptations
Because me & the ladies always had bad relations
I decided if I couldn't talk to her, I'd bag her
Took my car & went to kidnap her
But she was with her boyfriend, a 7ft tall maniac
Still, no worries I'm a braniac & I like cerelac
So I just walked up to him
And said, "Hey mister! My name's SKM"
He gave me a mean stare
I said, "Dude, now look here
I ain't trying to beef, I just came here
To challenge you to a contest
Let me just call a friend of mine
And see whose ass is the biggest
I called NAB, yo I need you man quick come here
He said don't worry man I'm there
& within a second he was there
As soon as the giant saw NAB's ass, he collapsed & lost all consciousness
A question mark on his existence like the monster of the Lak Ness
So believe me you don't wanna mess with me & lock heads.

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I haven't gotten the hang of transition & crafting a rhyme structure yet.

[Arabian Shady]

I'm glad u realise that its amaturiesh,it actauulay helps if u already know your mistakes
i liked it over all,i fell as tho it was inspired frm "as the world turns" i dunno but it just feels so
ne ways its was a gd attamept,try posting some more n you will improve
peace

Could you feed mine,its called "UNTITLED"