Stuck In My Ways

[Steve Spag]

Alright, another peice here where I just got high and started writing, lol. There's a certain flow to it and a lot of inner rhyming I hope you get. If you care to check out the beat it's by Shadowville Productions on Soundclick and it's called "Stuck In My Ways". I couldn't really think of an original title, lmao. Anyways, enjoy and let me know what you think.

You don't matter to me, you ain't stressin' my brain//
'Cause I am opening battle, I bring blistering pain//
Like in a wrestling ring, I obsess over things//
I do not have a conscious, I confess on my knees//
I know that I gotta fight, I know I gotta survive//
I gotta fight for my rights, I gotta show 'em my pride//
I'm gonn' show no remorse, to no opponents or whores//
'Cause I ignore all your bullshit, if you're coming, abort//
Do not test me at all, I am sick, I'm not well//
Noel's widthdrawing from ciggarettes, I am swimming in hell//
What the fuck's going on? All my trust is now broke//
I'm know I'm 'bout to combust, it'd be a joke to provoke//
No this ink will not stop, forever spittin' a flame//
You are wishin' I'll drop, you can't commit in this game//
Hear the tick and the tock, someone's pickin' the chain//
Someone's sickened to watch, I am stuck in my ways//

Leave feedback please

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed man, I appreciate it. Glad you like that piece, other than the last 6 bars, lol.

Anybody else got feed please?

[Xray]

good piece of writing and did you listen to that verse yet?

[Robbie G]

Great job man, I loved it.

I can't really think of anything specific to say other than keep it up lol.

[SajN]

Nice drop man
You have good lines, but I really think you should start working on "bigger", some multies and that..
But you have a good drop

Keep It up

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed guys, I appreciate it.

And to Non-Stop, yeah I plan on posting some of the better shit I've been working on as of late. I guess when I'm high I like to use more simple words in a different way, lool.

[Arabian Shady]

new shit!
alright hers wat i think: this isnt exactly your best(probably cause u were HIGH!!!) but like Non stop said,u mite want to revert back 2 ur old self n upgrade,i mean u r capable of so much more man
ne ways this was gd
peace