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IM BAAAA@@@aAAkkKkk

Postby Crossova16 » Feb 20th, '08, 17:19

crossovaz BACK, time to wipe your tears/
i know its been a while, like over a year/
but im back on the site ,im back on my gears/
im back to spit raps, and clean out your ears/
im lookin at these topics and reading through these rhymes/
and its been some time since ive read a good line/
its like your tryna avoid it, it aint no crime/
kuz if it was, id be locked up for quite some time/
i stay so fresh, i shine like im bold/
and my wrist so iced out, everything i touch is cold/
all you new rappers is getting real old/
your stories is over, its a new chapter to fold/
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Re: IM BAAAA@@@aAAkkKkk

Postby Xray » Feb 21st, '08, 09:40

not bad but bit too simple, next time you should work on making it more lyrical i see potential :b:
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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