Some writing

[Robbie G]

Hey guys heres some random stuff that i've written lately, (some of it from the rap battle section). Just wondering if you liked any of it, or if you had any tips.

Thanks.
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I'll make it rain pain, another dead rapper, slain, I'm dangerous like cocaine
your a crappy emcee, about as black as my pee, a skinny white he-she
matrix, stop tryin to rap your white, you stand out like a street light in the night
but lets not bring race, into this, its not the case who cares bout the color of your face
it's not raintime, its my time to shine beating your lyrically line for line
I listened to your song and it's shit, do the world a favor and just quite
I don't mean to be harsh just sayin the truth, you tryin to rap is like trying to find the fountain of youth
take the advice i've given to you: stop, go sit on your couch and watch your show, whinnie the poo

Chet, I bet you enjoyed touching my dick, you homo prick
why skip soulja cuz you suck too, and nah, you tell your boys what I told you!
that wasn't even close to dope, you rhyme like you a schoolgirl jumping rope
so your in the navy? or is the army don't matter you could never harm me, first ya gatta disarm me of this glock and beretta that I use ta shredda my enemies, one dead two dead fucking killing sprees

whos this arabian shady, throwin no punches, fighting like a lady
you from the middle east, but with me theres no peace, the violence will only increase

Whats your name 4D? oh lordy you tryin to rap but ur 40
just sit still old man, as I go for the kill and you kick the can.

I wake up at 6 o'clock, alarm clock giving me a shock
stumble out of bed and hit my head, could only find one sock
the bus pulls up at 20 of, the cold air showing me no love
start off the day with English, not even the fish, are up this early
smiled at a hot girl in the hall named sherley, then realized my hair was too curly
slept for the rest of the day until i woke up to the annoying sound of the fray
some girl was blaring music on the bus I told her to hush and fell back into a comma
woke up the next day in Oklahoma and everything was red, tired and fed up with all the crap i wrote this rap

[mctworm]

it's o.k., but I'm white, and u said somethin like whites can't rap. I take that as offense. but on the other hand, it was kinda kool so overall: that was gangsta

[Robbie G]

haha thanks guys.

Yeah I know i'm white to but that was the first thing that came to me.