Moving Forward?

[Rain Matrix]

I got a kid coming and I'm fed up with nothing
tha rain is hunting for truth cuz it's something

I'll always hold dear so I go forth with no fear
refusing to show tears time passes slow here

u can't escape age it will turn ya face grey
supressing a fake rage only ta make way

for real madness as our senior citizens kneel ravaged
they feel sadness rationed like miltary meal packets

right now I'm twenty three living in this country free
as all our money's siezed by other peoples hungry greed

copying drugs like a parrot making u pay to ya parish
so would it make us care if there were no generics

they have tha beaten lured I mean think about it even u hurt
our their reasons pure it's better for buisness to treat then cure

no court is trying them by trial so then who is lying then
I see people crying when we will help our dying friends

their lies have got u waiting there's a lesson taught thru patience
they call tha cops to place him this is how they control population

so many verses, my work is coming 2 tha surface
this spit don't appeal 2 tha worthless
acts stay in tha circus, my flow merc's this
almost picture perfect tha way I serve it

I'm fed up with tha lies it's pain that lets us know were alive
thats comes as no surprise cuz were gonna feel it to we die

to me killing is a little drastic they do it so they get no static
pointless murder is so tragic war is easier then being diplomatic

haunted by all yur past decisons u just want to be happy living
politicians make bad predictions time to make my last revisons

so maybe I can finish so lucky those disguised cynics owe us free
if yur in this hole trust me don't be persuaded by clinical studies

finally I've come to end tha dry weather it's obvious with a review of my records
some use cash ta buy treasures they could be tournicates and not apply pressure

my raps are fire sell these arsons there not paid avertisements like tele bargains
fuck those people on celly's narcing they need to "walk away" like kelly clarkson

I'll go hostile ta split his wig in like tha quickest fission
ya listed missing and I served it to u like assited living

I know who sports fake flows so I let them portray foes
as I twist um like a tornado and bring it to an ornate close

half ya fake u'll all have ta wait 2 captivate like dollars do
I can't put all of u in solitude and ask u what u call tha truth

so many verses, my work is coming 2 tha surface
this spit don't appeal 2 tha worthless
acts stay in tha circus, my flow merc's this
almost picture perfect tha way I serve it

[mctworm]

nice rhymes dude, almost better than mine

cool gangsta rhymes. Nice way to use time.
If only for every rap u get a dime.

[Steve Spag]

Wow man, you never cease to impress me. Steady rhyming, a sick flow for it, clever lines and a good vocab . Keep it up bro, can't wait to see some more shit. This is probably my personal favourite of your drops.

[Rain Matrix]

If only for every rap u get a dime.

I don't just get a dime for every rap I compose I smoke it

u can call that endless chronic

thanks steve I respect u
u've been recording longer than me

I readded some of my old lines for recording purposes

[Xray]

dope drop man your improving

[Arabian Shady]

DOPE

u've definately taken ur rhymes to another level,no doubt about that
i mean evn tho the rhymes(structure) has become simpler the meanin of the drop itself captivates and enthralles readers man.for stuff like that u dont need too many multies n accesorries.
awesome as allways,wiked stufff!!

peace

[Hadez]

dopeness Rain, pure dopeness.
meaningful yet still enriched with rhymes and a flawless flow. nothin negative to say, definately one of the best things i've read from you.

[Rain Matrix]

I used to write poetry all tha time
one day I heard some rap and just started freestyling
then after a while I found this site to come to
I keep writing from tha heart before tha brain
meaningfull lyrics are everything to me
I hope as I continue recording that comes out
and they don't dismiss it cuz my voice can be soft
or for tha fact that I'm white I love rap
and I definitly love trshady.com... thanks for everything

[Ka0t1c]

tight shit, i'm not even that good right now...seriously

but at least im backkkkkk!