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[Tash8]

really dope!!

reminds me of em's first verse in renegade!

i' like the concept, good flow and ncie multis!

[Xray]

reminds me of em's first verse in renegade!

nice work but why soo short? wassup wid you and your chorus and one verse tracks?

[Xray]

reminds me of em's first verse in renegade!

nice work but why soo short? wassup wid you and your chorus and one verse tracks?

Its not my track, its my feature verse on someone else's song.

Thanks for the comment tash

ohh my badd well than great verse *gets back to movie*

[SajN]

Damn. Nice verse
Nice concept .. And great multies

[Arabian Shady]

sick shit Mc
i've neva reali had a chance to read ur drops but this was amazing
i mean literally everything was perfect ,flow,multies,meaning,structure-it all fits
awesome shit
cant wait ta hear it! (if u post tho)
peace

[Jay-19]

Really tight shit man! I can't give any other feedback other than this: It's aaaaall good!

I really loved this rhyme:

see if you want me to be the reckless, criminal who tries to rape kids
gimme your necklace, rip your daughters panties off and pass the bracelets

Tight shit man!

[Purple23Haze]

It's to much like Shady influence or no try to be different

[Tash8]

It's to much like Shady influence or no try to be different

i agree that the concept is simliar but i dont see much other similarities.

also FEED http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=42534 maybe

[Ka0t1c]

its well written you are God! jk amen bro

[Purple23Haze]

uuuuooooooooo dog I got mad more ad dope rhymes that are original so don't get mad cause I don't like you and for the record when I read that shit all I could here was Eminems voice

Oh and I was holding this back but your shit SUCKS dude what the fuck yuou wanna pollute the youth the truth is your on the goof list stupid

[Tash8]

BEEF BEEF BEEF BEEF BEEF BEEF BEEF BEEF BEEF BEEF!!!

[Purple23Haze]

I didn't double post again Man. Anyway how long you been rappin cause if my rhymes weren't so over ya head you might realize that it's pretty fuckin hard rat a tat tat a ball n a bat ball stuffs the mouth n that bats swings house your spouse is tired of gettin fucked like we're wired like we're a dryer so nighty nighty nerd now I will never buy yours, you suck. PEACE and cry me a river build a bridge and get over it and I aint cocky I know I'm good but I aint the best I will never lay claim to that. And the concept is what you need to make original sample words it's the english langauge we all say the same shit in fact alot of times we all feel the same way and I take it back I do like your shit especially if eminem wrote it but thats if he wrote it I wanna see something that is original like a new concept.
Cause now a days theres very lil original thought
most our understnading comes from what we are taught
I bought a book from the new age section
it explains how the power of suggeston can be a weapon
and how we in battle spiritually so why have figure of speech
Something original there is so much more to rap about other than raping and how parents are disgusted by this even though it's very real, and peace the fuck out

[SajN]

Maybe, could you feed this please: http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=42547

and also the other verses on the page that other link links to..
Just so you know that, I've changed a little bit here and there, but would like feed on track in overall as well..

[Purple23Haze]

Your a real asswhole and the fuck if I don't make sense fuck you

[Purple23Haze]

You think your smart I get internet geek collects my speech like I didn't write but that I actually did speak seize to be please or be just don't try to teach me or reach me prove you wrong too easy leave me be peace puppy!