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Wicked Delight (Steve Spag)

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Wicked Delight (Steve Spag)

Postby Steve Spag » Feb 29th, '08, 03:58

Well I wrote this peice yesterdy acapella, but if I ever do spit it, it will be to the Emotionless beat by Jim Jones. Of course, like everything I put up here, you may not get the flow for it because of the way I say some words and some little pauses. Hope you enjoy it, and let me know what you think please.

Fuck the stereotypes, and labels on the mic.//
'Cause when I'm spittin' this written shit it's a wicked delight//
Another song recorded for this boy that's white//
With my annoying voice you can't avoid the hype//
You couldn't match my passion, I don't rap for cash and//
All the hash or asses, I'm a bastard laughin'//
My tracks ain't lackin', all the action's packed in//
To the back, I'm snappin', don't you ask what happened//
I'm a little corrupted, I'm a little disturbed//
Don't be pushin' my buttons, I will swing at you birds//
And knock you out of the park, I got a thirst for words//
Every verse's purpose is to hurt you terds//
And this curse is workin' with these perfect verbs//
On this earth I'm searchin' for a certain surge//
I'm on the verge of mergin' to a preferred new worth//
So revert your herds before the worst occours//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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Re: Wicked Delight (Steve Spag)

Postby mctworm » Feb 29th, '08, 05:01

DUDE :o NICE RHYMES, SEROIUSLY :worship: THAT WAS THE BEST I HEARD OF 2008 :flower: my opinion: your the best on TRshady :happy:
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Re: Wicked Delight (Steve Spag)

Postby Tash8 » Feb 29th, '08, 05:08

it's rpetty sick man!!

keep at it, but start recording!
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Re: Wicked Delight (Steve Spag)

Postby Steve Spag » Feb 29th, '08, 06:21

Thanks for the comments guys, I really appreciate it. Coming from Tash and Maybe it means a lot, I respect both of your guys shit, so for you to like mine is quite satisfying, lol.
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Re: Wicked Delight (Steve Spag)

Postby Hadez » Feb 29th, '08, 06:56

great lines :y:

full of rhymes. concept was pretty typical but is not at all a bad thing.

keep'em commin :y:
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Re: Wicked Delight (Steve Spag)

Postby Steve Spag » Mar 1st, '08, 17:58

Hadez wrote:great lines :y:

full of rhymes. concept was pretty typical but is not at all a bad thing.

keep'em commin :y:

Thanks a lot bro.

Anybody else got any feed?
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Re: Wicked Delight (Steve Spag)

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 1st, '08, 22:32

i dont like it but it does show that u are buildin up some skills and understanding how to rhyme so keep improving, it really isnt bad :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Wicked Delight (Steve Spag)

Postby Steve Spag » Mar 2nd, '08, 01:35

Kaotic wrote:i dont like it but it does show that u are buildin up some skills and understanding how to rhyme so keep improving, it really isnt bad :y: :y:

Thanks for the feed man :)
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