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Ha I love yous I'm troubled and juggled so puzzled

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Ha I love yous I'm troubled and juggled so puzzled

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 2nd, '08, 02:41

I defile meanwhile I rile the Nile
With vile and bile wild and mild
Miles of idols through out the
Bible but while they were idle
I took form of a child named Micheal
for my most buyable lies told
by the sanest psycho side show nice flowed eyes swolled
twice stoled in fights chose to be the right mold of my folks
You like my jokes cause they serious as eyes poked while most
Cry soaked I boast in spite insight inside a host til the time is right
I'll just post my roast from the east to the west coast
Paint you with a fresh coat the best bloke to ever step forward
A sexplorer an ex warrior attest a test for words and will simply just scorch yours
Swords hurt wars cursed soar first with lord birthed
more birds that chirp than your church in worth
I work like the mirth of all that has searched
Mysterious delirious curious hear me just hear me no fuss just hear me whats up
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Re: Ha I love yous I'm troubled and juggled so puzzled

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 2nd, '08, 02:48

Word but when Im in the zone structure is a mother fucker
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Re: Ha I love yous I'm troubled and juggled so puzzled

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 2nd, '08, 02:50

Mad people want me ta be a ghostwriter you know I say okay if I'm getting my words out and a percentage
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Re: Ha I love yous I'm troubled and juggled so puzzled

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 2nd, '08, 02:54

Yo ur hella funny yo have a good night man
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Re: Ha I love yous I'm troubled and juggled so puzzled

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 2nd, '08, 03:52

i dunno, im not digging it, it seems bad to me... :n: :n:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Ha I love yous I'm troubled and juggled so puzzled

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 2nd, '08, 03:57

It's the baddest shit you'll ever see
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Re: Ha I love yous I'm troubled and juggled so puzzled

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 2nd, '08, 04:01

I don;t doubt it but it's the worst shit you'll ever see
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Re: Ha I love yous I'm troubled and juggled so puzzled

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 2nd, '08, 04:01

Read the words and if need be look up the defintions
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Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 2nd, '08, 04:03

And by alot do you mean those that cop shadies style or the original subliminal criminals
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Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 2nd, '08, 04:29

What the fuck are you talkin about to cocky bigot your shit is too shady anyway why should I listen to you what the fuck do you know and made no sense or just over ya head dum fuck keep your hanise words to your self
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Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 2nd, '08, 04:31

don't be mad cause I don't like your shit and you don't have to like my shit but don't make ignorant statements of which you know nothing about
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Postby Tash8 » Mar 2nd, '08, 04:39

shut the fuk up

ur rhymes are simple as fuck
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Re: Ha I love yous I'm troubled and juggled so puzzled

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 2nd, '08, 05:25

Okay
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Postby Xray » Mar 2nd, '08, 09:45

cool lines but some lines didn't make sense..but no ones perfect, so keep doing your thing just don't get cocky cause being cocky makes me dislike your stuff which i don't so all good :y:
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Re: Ha I love yous I'm troubled and juggled so puzzled

Postby Epidemik » Mar 2nd, '08, 21:10

ya... some good lines but i agree with it not making sense in parts.
try to stay on a topic instead of just trying to rhyme
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