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Tha Counter MC

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 2nd, '08, 21:23

I'm yur Fucking Opposite let tha Hunting Cops Assist
u say Somethings Gotta Give like a Coming Stop Ta This

if only I'd Show My Face but I can't I Won't Die Fake
u feel my Flow Vibrate with fact as it Goes By Traced

by tha Hidden Censors that steady control yur Living Center
while Driven Men Work to spy on u cuz their Missons End Yurs

I'm a Vocal Skinny Kid so going Postals In Me Bitch
they leave Folks So Dimly Lit like Global Guniea Pigs

some people are Too Rich to know what tha Truth Is
slandering rap Music and saying our Youth's Sick

tha educated Clueless spreads democracy to a New Risk
what made them Do This money their afraid to Lose It

their digging tha Scholars Grave by taking All Yur Pay
investing in their Faltered Ways as tha Dollars Slave

this business might Pay Me More if I could only drop these audios off at Shady's Door
I stand my ground even on Shaky Floors that rebate still doesn't cover his Crazy War
when I spit tha Fakes Be Tore my school color was purple bud so I have a Hazy Core

as I dig into my Braincells there cool enough to Change Hell so it suites to Rain Well
now I'm not a portrait of my Faint Self on tha Same Shelf remembering how tha Pain Felt

straight up I don't Bang Tha Gun I don't rep a set or claim to be Gangsta Son
I say I'm white And Ya Stunned my lyrics were unbeaten to they Ran Ta One

as an artist tha world in my Skull Differs I love life too much to ever Pull Triggers
I could use cash but I'm not a Gold Digger I'm panoramic I see tha Whole Picture
Last edited by Rain Matrix on Mar 2nd, '08, 23:59, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Tha Counter MC (work in progress)

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 2nd, '08, 21:27

I really like this I liked the setup and it really flowed like I read it flowing thats tight
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Re: Tha Counter MC (work in progress)

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 2nd, '08, 21:29

oh yeah, this is a well put together piece, im likin it a lot!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Tha Counter MC

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 3rd, '08, 20:52

audio'd on my page
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Re: Tha Counter MC

Postby Steve Spag » Mar 3rd, '08, 23:04

Pretty dope drop my friend.

"some people are Too Rich to know what tha Truth Is
slandering rap Music and saying our Youth's Sick"

That was my fav. lines.

Keep it up bro :)
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Re: Tha Counter MC

Postby Epidemik » Mar 4th, '08, 02:00

Steve Spag wrote:Pretty dope drop my friend.

"some people are Too Rich to know what tha Truth Is
slandering rap Music and saying our Youth's Sick"

That was my fav. lines.

Keep it up bro :)


ya that part was definitly sick!
keep it commin man :y:
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