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im doin just fine

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 2nd, '08, 22:09

well im doin just fine, how about you
nothing's really new at this time, that is no doubt true

besides i've got a future to find when i get back out my blues
i have a duty to rhyme and a persuit

to master this music i write and blast myself thru
in my luminous life asked of to few

choosin to climb fast up the nume
ris ladders while usin a mic and expressin their views

so i would never decline, i will forever resume
this treasure of mine and pass all the ruins to better define with an answer illumned
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: im doin just fine

Postby Epidemik » Mar 2nd, '08, 22:27

nice. i like it.
some words i didnt know though lol
not in my vocab
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Re: im doin just fine

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 3rd, '08, 01:52

another damn good drop from u... I Presume
when tha rains done tha pop charts can Resume
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