STOP hatin and quit rappin

[Crossova16]

the only thing you eva clapped was a backboard (ballyn)
give up with the rap and keep your eyes on the blackboard/
take your rhymebook out da rack, kuz its wack and flawed
it aint gna get you crap,lisen to ur momz ,nd work at your dads store/
i talk to these little wimps who have these ridiculous dreams/
i dont wna be mean or pick at these teens/
but when it comes to ink, nobody is as vicious as me/
so put down your pen and leave it down once the bell rings at three/
shit gets hilarious, when i come out and dudes start hatin/
you the only one feelin urself, your flow is like masturbatin/
im racin, i keep pace when im lacin this paper with my fate and/
all this hate is making me great, but its to the point that i cud take/

ni88az shud stop hatin mothafu*ka, shit who is youuu?/
i don need the rating mothafu*ka, dats wat ma produca do/
m0ney im makin mothafu*ka/ lemme get through to you/
i know its hard to take in motha fucka/ but i d0 wat i do

[Epidemik]

hahaha nice.

i liked this part
shit gets hilarious, when i come out and dudes start hatin/
you the only one feelin urself, your flow is like masturbatin/
shit was funny

[Crossova16]

lol thankssssss mannn..... i try i try

[Rain Matrix]

I got any hate for this... it's good
az for quit rapping... not gonna happen

[Steve Spag]

It was alright. Nothing really that stood out except for a few lines. I feel that you should cut down your lines a little more, some of them are way longer than necessary.

For instance:

but when it comes to ink, nobody is as vicious as me/
so put down your pen and leave it down once the bell rings at three/

I don't know the flow you had planned for it, but that second line is a little longer than it should be. Keep it up though.

[Arabian Shady]

it was ok. but you could have made it better like Steve said.
o yh i agree wid epidemik about the masterbatin part,was wiked
peace