chicken scratch pt 2

[Epidemik]

I set you haters ablaze, when i make for the stage //
- my eyes glazed from always blazin the haze //
amazed these snake fakers they aint doin the same //
instead they claimin they the shit, when they actually lame //

radio play now adays means your plain,
you shouldnt be famous, and the rap game's a shame //
"who's to blame? the parents or the tracks??"
fuck that! but somedays im emberassed to like rap //
cuz all the whack cats that artificially rap //
be claiming they the shit when they officially lack //
and all the rappers thats caught in whack beef //
that try to be rip the jackers but only attrackt heat //

havnt finished it...

leave some feed plz

[mctworm]

nice rhymes, i dont have any advice, just saying i like it

[liljon]

haha its crazy because like almost every 2 or 3rd word rhymes

[Epidemik]

ya i try to rhyme as much as possible while trying to stay on topic or at least make sense at the same time haha

thanks guys!! appreciate it!

[Steve Spag]

Wow man, this one shit's on your last post, lmao. This shit was fucking crazy dude. The whole messege for it and everything. Rhyme scheme was nuts, flow was sick. Keep it up brother

[Epidemik]

Wow man, this one shit's on your last post, lmao. This shit was fucking crazy dude. The whole messege for it and everything. Rhyme scheme was nuts, flow was sick. Keep it up brother

hahaha thanks alot bro. ill probly continue with this one since its gettin some positive feed
appreciate it

[Ka0t1c]

yeah, that would be really cool to add more to it, i like this piece, it is pretty good

[Arabian Shady]

thats 7 frm ur last 1 dude
wiked shit