My Life

[Boston]

heres just a verse i put together..my first time writing in months..
its all true, so it was hard to write..tell me what you think, and if you think it sucks, tell me what you think i could do to improve
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have you ever been in this position/
standin' their wishing/
to forget about the other girl thats not in your vision/
thats what im missing/
two girls, which one to be kissing/
"forget em' both Josh, you outta be fishing"/
"theres other fish in the sea", get me outta this mission/
i got other problems in ma life, n im determined to win em/
two breaking n entering's, larceny and stolen property/
selling drugs, being homeless, skipping school, my brothers molding off of me/
im supposed to be a role model, because of the people who look up to me/
but i cant set an example if my actions are viewed publicly/
i have to stop doing this, it hurts the people who care for me/
even if i do screw up, i know theyll always be there for me/
all these problems of mine are just wasting time/
life is to short, n im done wasting mine../

[liljon]

omg that was great...well to me it was.....and because u said it was true

[mctworm]

awesome its good.

[Boston]

thank yall for your comments
its appreciated

[Boston]

thanks, ill work on that

i think i know what you mean but i got lazy and just wanted to reach 16 bars

good looks though

[Boston]

bump..

[Ka0t1c]

that's some good stuff man...props

[Boston]

thanks.

[Purple23Haze]

Boston your fuckin crazy dawg Josh is my name and that just described a stroy I been through FOR REAL THATS FUCKIN NUTS RIGHT? Especially about the two girls I can't even see shit and the drugs
Except my brother didn't rub off on me in a bad way

[Boston]

thanks a lot bro, and i hope things work out for you and all your problems/situations your having.