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Postby M-Pyre » Mar 4th, '08, 22:24

spit anything you want, as long it's one verse!

my mic is dust free, got rhymes you must see/
you must be, trying to love me, beside the money/
you find it funny, then you'll die trying to find it honey/
I look aside the chunky and look to find the bunny's/
with some of these double d's, I'm so hung-ery, my tongue is on my cheek/
and thats my firing line, see you crying inside/
no reconciling tonight, just a fight to invite/
to the guys of this site, and outshine, who's most bright/
as I handcrafted this shit, with a pen and pad and my lips/
the suspense taps fast as I stand laughing at pricks/
who just can't master this shit, with their blabbering ticks/
and a bladder that just, can't handle the pis/
I'll be careful a bit, there for I"ll airborne and tear those faggots to shreds/
I'm not fronting, but acting instead, attacking the threads/
of rapping , and threat, the biggest actor to spit on here/
call me an activist, I'm a man of action, playing with adjectives/
laxatives to relax my stomach, when these accidents react like drumsticks/
a sound comes out of nothing, like these fags that need to say something/
after I bumped them, stomped them, and dumped them in the woods/
but it's all good, cause I'm hunting and coming with nothing thats something of a ....small turd/
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Re: spit a verse

Postby M-Pyre » Mar 5th, '08, 03:24

come on people, post a verse
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Re: spit a verse

Postby Epidemik » Mar 5th, '08, 04:37

if life is like a dice game, then luck aint wut i roll //
thers been enough hard times its rough but iv grown //
the stuff that i grow, is the stuff that helps me cope //
you wanna get splifted? its the stuff that i roll //
im not supposed to smoke, but fuck i want mo' //
its a need it aint a crutch so i clutch my weed bowl //
was in police foundations but fuck the 5-0 //
i live it up everyday when im puffin the hyrdo //
your bobbin to the beat as its touchin your soul //
and your eardrums become struck with my flow //
i could care less or give to fucks if i blow //
im in this shit for fun so fuck all of my foe's //
ill leave them full of holes, layin level with their toes //
ill shake those motherfuckers and break all of their noses //
im so potent you gotta take me in small doses //
if you dont, you'll be layin in a bed of red and roses //
that shit goes for anybody who opposes //
the lyrics im composin will leave these mc's frozen //
me and rap togeather? its as if that shit was chosen //
cuz on the microphone it is known that i am golden //
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Re: spit a verse

Postby Steve Spag » Mar 5th, '08, 06:24

I heard I only diss bitches 'cause I'm just a big prick//
I would never spit a lie, you think she never licked a dick?//
You bitch, she ain't a slut, but I'm calling her a cunt//
I ain't saying it for nothing, 'cause I will back it up//
My brain; it was fucked, the pain; I'm out of luck//
Her name; ain't worth a buck, my gain; this shit sucks//
I don't diss ex's out the blue, for real//
I spit how I feel at the times I couldn't heal//
So it's healing me now, with these words that I flow//
I just ain't rappin' 'bout a hoe, it's a hoe that turned foe//
You know? It ain't fair, and I can't back away//
I'm like a wolf that is hungry circiling 'round it's prey//
I'm being forced to do this from this voice inside//
Seeking evil fortune, ain't no choice to hide//
It's gonna hunt you down, and destroy your pride//
It will force itself upon your un-important life//
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Re: spit a verse

Postby Epidemik » Mar 5th, '08, 07:09

solid drop!
You know? It ain't fair, and I can't back away//
I'm like a wolf that is hungry circiling 'round it's prey//

^^^^ that part was my fav. :y:
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Re: spit a verse

Postby Steve Spag » Mar 5th, '08, 07:41

Epidemik wrote:solid drop!
You know? It ain't fair, and I can't back away//
I'm like a wolf that is hungry circiling 'round it's prey//

^^^^ that part was my fav. :y:

Thanks a lot bro, I appreciate it. Your whole peice was fucking killer aswell. I loved the rhyme-scheme for it and the words you used were sick! Keep it up dude.
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Re: spit a verse

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 5th, '08, 15:39

most aint sure what to post or afraid then they turn away
and stay ghost because brave folks have decayed
so go n mature, make a couple jokes you may
im just sayin you won't learn today if you aim below under terrain
i know of your pain, burns bubbles your veins
cuz you've come for one thing to show but some trouble remains
that sure grows while comfort does fade
your soul suffers each day
until the toll's confronted
you'll out number the wage
or double the pay from whatever goal you mustard to take
your soul to a loveable place that's full of a great wonderful faith
just control your puzzle God made
because a role you'll uncover n face or wander astray
you wonder which way to follow today but you oughtta not wait
there's a lot of powerful bait which swallows the hollowest
your boundaries are laid right now, doubtin it's unsafe
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: spit a verse

Postby M-Pyre » Mar 5th, '08, 21:27

Kaotic wrote:most aint sure what to post or afraid then they turn away
and stay ghost because brave folks have decayed
so go n mature, make a couple jokes you may
im just sayin you won't learn today if you aim below under terrain
i know of your pain, burns bubbles your veins
cuz you've come for one thing to show but some trouble remains
that sure grows while comfort does fade
your soul suffers each day
until the toll's confronted
you'll out number the wage
or double the pay from whatever goal you mustard to take
your soul to a loveable place that's full of a great wonderful faith
just control your puzzle God made
because a role you'll uncover n face or wander astray
you wonder which way to follow today but you oughtta not wait
there's a lot of powerful bait which swallows the hollowest
your boundaries are laid right now, doubtin it's unsafe


damn thats illness right there, big props :y:
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Re: spit a verse

Postby preest » Mar 14th, '08, 00:36

Just a quick one...

I'm in a police scene cordened off, holding a sawn-off
and some semtex at number ten with plans to blow the door off
locked in a cell where the paddings been torn off
let me out of this straight jacket, the noveltys worn off
I'ma kill every fake fucking celebrity that I'm bored of
clench my fist of fury and knock their fucking jaws off
jacking off to pictures of guys dressed up as bitches
inviting Eddie Muphy round for a game of soggy buscuit
its sick, its explicit, I'm getting timid and I fidgit
with my dick while I remember the fucking bitch the bit it
but now I'm seeing spirals, all my boys are holding rifles
I've got piles, oh my life is so delightful
I used to get high but now I just drink to get by
my nuts are getting bigger, my dicks shrinking in size
I'm scratching on my nut sack, jesus it's fucking bleeding
I went a bit deep and now it's even leaking semen
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Re: spit a verse

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 14th, '08, 03:11

Im thinkin of diabolical schemes
Mind altering things, like how to enter
And insult you in your dreams
Assault you n hear the screams
There's no fault in my regime
N since I'm being taller n supreme
I'm wonderin how you fit in girls jeans
I called it you didn't even rip the seems
Pussy bitch I'll maul you into strings
Ring a ling my ding a ling
Has inclining you want it as bad
as a rappers singing, so what I'm bringing
Is my thing thing like bubba with no rubber
Not sayin fuck me sayin fuck you so fuck ya
You soft and as yellow as mustard
You and your fellow ass buster
I muster so much I must of, left you in the dust bra
Now shut the fuck up dumb ass fuck what
I cut a rug n bust a gut thinkin of you
Like how you stinkin look stay in the rubble
I smoke green eyed bitches like you
outta the bong to hear it bubble
You stumbled upon this rumble
Now don't mumble speak clear
Now see hear I'm buzzin like a bumble
Thats how I bee here when I leave here
Do you really think your gonna breathe clear
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Re: spit a verse

Postby M-Pyre » Mar 14th, '08, 04:00

fuck fighting clowns, I'd be shooting people from higher grounds/
I'll be hiding down, and blow your head off, in sniping rounds/
trying out, some of these rifles up in the Eiffel tower/
with a high amount of fire power and ride this cycle, about 5 times an hour/
in my time it's wowzers, just try not to ride, and defy my power/
I walk with miles of strides, and fly like clouds, as I hypnotize my crowd/
and list those guys as cowards, and strip that ice, its ours/
you little mice got devoured, now lets hit em twice, but louder/
and kick em right, under the towel, no wonder they foul/
but I gotta go, it's time for me, to hit the bedroom door/
peace out, like stepping in the club waving pistols unannounced/
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Re: spit a verse

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 14th, '08, 04:06

Thats kinda columbine like dawg seriously dont do it
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Re: spit a verse

Postby M-Pyre » Mar 14th, '08, 19:05

Purple23Haze wrote:Thats kinda columbine like dawg seriously dont do it


you mean me, cause I was just keystyling man

srry if I offended anyone with it, I myself can't see the problem!
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Re: spit a verse

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 14th, '08, 20:53

It was tight to m-pyre I was just kidding yo but for real dont do it still kidding you didnt offend anyone dawg or at least not me I was seriously just joking keep keystyling
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Re: spit a verse

Postby shadyallday » Mar 22nd, '08, 20:50

i'm needed in the game like a young michael jordan/ i'm hearin shit from rappers that don't even pick up the mic that often/ man, i'm quite exhausted/ all i do is kill the game, so they gotta bury me with a mic in my coffin/ i don't care if i'm liked or supported/ just don't say shit when u see the red light, i'm recording/ sometimes i feel like i got a red dot on my forehead, one wrong word and my career is dead/ i guess at times the game is evil/ but i still gotta entertain these people/ as long as i'm ahead of the game its peaceful/ i can't even enjoy the breathing room/ if i do all these other cats will start squeezin through/ but that'll never happen i was made for rappin/ our acquaintance may have been a fatal attraction/ my love/hate relationship with rap may have been a major distraction/ but my words are my weapons, and they speak louder than my actions/
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