New verse... feed?

[Makaveli525]

yeah... mak is back, and i just wrote a new verse... if anyone wouldn't mind givin me any opinions...

Ayo it's instantly
A dope rhyme spittin fiend, a diss machine
Washin out any wack rappers just like Listerine
Or Mr. Clean, tearin mics in half, I just split the seam
Into the room I slip unseen, you run so fast you rip ya jeans
So I keep pushin the bar until I, reach the limits
You speakin timid, you so scared once we get in it
So breathe a minute, while I leave mics lethal dented
I leave weak people finished cause I keep on winnin
Let's make it happen, and those who fake in rappin?
We blazin, smackin, all the way from the A to Staten
Half of you fakin, actin so ima just take it back and
At a quick rate, attackin flip you so fast I create a backspin
My pen is maximum security, it's Mak, I know you heard of me
I'm back, to get the currency, you wack? we gonna burn ya G
An actual emergency, the track revives with words from me
And I never hesitate to get attackin suckas verbally

[Purple23Haze]

ha that was pretty ill

[Rap Dogg]

Nice skills dawg.respect

[Steve Spag]

Never seen your posts before, but this was was dope! The rhyme scheme was fuckin' nuts and it carried REALLY well with the flow for it. Keep it up dude, can't wait to see some more shit .