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HOT VERSE

Postby Rap Dogg » Mar 5th, '08, 00:24

I started to rap an i've already been charged,once I enter the room,you're fallin apart
we're deep minded but people rarely callin us smart.it's all true,listen to the lyrics,we talkin from heart.
When I started I thought it's just music,but it's not,it's lot more,
that's why I spit like this,ma nitch is hot.
ma man Money is here,i can see you twitchin lot,heroes are comin',at this point bitches stop,
Bullet is on loose,better run an hide quick in the basement,
cuz minute later I'll spill your blood,take your body an seep it on pawement.
We're not killers,we just try to keep entertainment,one more word an I'll be splittin your face in,
two halfs,no need for weapons,our lyrics get you waisted.
There's a point where kids stop listenin to parents,we're becomin teachers,
it's 21.st century,today they call us preachers,
we don't have responsebility to kids cuz they understand us an all of our features.
They know we got feelins too,we're people,we ain just walkin creatures.Listen to the lyrics,
your heart beat stops when you hear it,I give honest comments,I don't start beef with it.
I never start,if someone does,I respond with a smart brief in it,you just need to have bit of skills to read it.
Look at this now with E-Z Money by my side,an I gotta please this honey in my ride,
Saint Clair,I'm that meany bummy in the tribe!

Tell me what ya think.Respect
WHEN I GRAB A PENCIL AND SQUEEZE IT BETWEEN FINGERS,I'M NOT A RAPPER,I'M A DEMON WHO SPEAKS ENGLISH,FREAK GENIUS
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Re: HOT VERSE

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 5th, '08, 00:34

I'm gonna be brutally honest that was not a hot verse, sorry peace out
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Re: HOT VERSE

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 5th, '08, 15:43

I started to rap an i've already been charged,once I enter the room,you're fallin apart
we're deep minded but people rarely callin us smart.it's all true,listen to the lyrics,we talkin from heart


that's the only part i like, after that you lose usin your heart

if i were you and i wanted to have a "Hot Verse" i would begin here.... keepin it real
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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