chicken scratch pt 3

[Epidemik]

I'm stuck at work, from 11:30 to 8 //
goin bizerk, because this jerk be up in my face //
absurdly blurtin, expressin nothing but hate //
guess its safe to say that luck aint comin my way //
nothin but dreams of bucks, dreams of gettin payed //
but all i get is regret from dumb decisions that iv made //
nothin but countless days, of always livin afraid //
worryin if they'll evict me, if the bills dont get payed //
kicked to the curb, cuz im only makin minimum wage //
wut can i say? lucks just not goin my way //
and the bad luck?? its just not goin away //
im lookin forward to the day, where shit dont look gray //
its these thoughts keep me goin, keep my mind from runnin astray //
keep the lyrics commin about the situations that i portray //
and its the pictures that i paint in my brain that keep me sane //

kinda lost it neer the end... i think im a line short too.. but wutever..
anyways drop your thoughts.. any help is appreciated.

[Ka0t1c]

yeah man, i like this, it's a good read

you are missing a line too

but yeah, this one is the best one i've seen from you so far, keep it up

you' re definitely on the right track

[mctworm]

your stlye reminds me of Eminem, which means ! Ur good!

[Steve Spag]

I thought it was pretty sweet man. Not your best shit, but it was pretty good. Some really sick lines in there.

"absurdly blurtin, expressin nothing but hate //
guess its safe to say that luck aint comin my way // "

That was my favourite line of it.

Keep it up dude, and when you get a chance could you feed my new peice I put up?

Peacee!