The End (STEVE SPAG)

[Steve Spag]

Just wrote this peice today to a beat called "The End" by Mister KA on Soundclick for any of those interested. I hope you get the flow for it, some of the lines may seem a little long but it flows alright the way I got it down, lol. Leave some feedback please and let me know what ya' think.

I've been through a lot, heart-breaks and head-ache's//
With no med's perscribed, don't be surprised I'm deadly//
I've been stabbed in the back by my friends and family//
And of course there's Jenny, so my pen comes handy//
When the melody begins I cringe and take control//
I binge until I'm finished, I grin and make you fold//
I'll win at any minute, I'm swingin' for the gold//
Your head will sure be spinnin', I'm spittin' it til you fall//
You think you can match this? You're probably wrong//
Because you're shit, so go practice, this ain't a hobby at all//
I will wish on a casket for your body and songs//
And if you harm me, it's on, I won't be bothered for long//
I am sick of this pressure that is trouble enough//
I have been humble soo far, but now it's double the sluts//
It is double my suffering, and tripple my rage//
I won't be crippled again, so I am flippin' this page//

Oh yeah, and "again" at the end is said in the accent form, slant-rhyming with rage, page, lol.

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo, 2008.

Leave feedback please .

[Xray]

really nice and i didn't hear the beat and read but i still got the flow was dope

favourite lines

I am sick of this pressure that is trouble enough//
I have been humble soo far, but now it's double the sluts//

[Epidemik]

When the melody begins I cringe and take control//
I binge until I'm finished, I grin and make you fold//
I'll win at any minute, I'm swingin' for the gold//

dope drop as usual! that was my fav. part.. ^^^
cant really give any corrective feedback...
its all good as usual!

[Steve Spag]

I liked it man, really good job as always


DAMN you put copyright....I'm was so gonna steal it

Haha, thanks man. Hope that was a joke though at the end, lmao.

And thanks for the feed from X-Ray and Epidemik, as always, I appreciate it .

Anybody else got feed?

[SajN]

I got,

Good drop, liked some of the lines that's already pointed out on the other feeds
I didn't listen to the beat but got the flow.
Good job

[Ka0t1c]

thats my favorite one from you so far, great job on this one man, mad props!