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Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 9th, '08, 09:31

as i progress, i collect stress from my quest
so i confess im a mess because of my regrets

and im upset i express the effects you detect
set to collapse my track that is ahead

cuz i have led off the wrong step to the edge
and im a wreck so next could be death

am i set for this trap, a net to my rep
i had left and im kept well detached from the rest on this map

that's a fact, but yet i got my rap still intact
and im ready for Iraq's heavy attacks

and if ya threat me or act, im battling back
grab your nut sacks, i'll be handling my gat
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Negative

Postby Xray » Mar 9th, '08, 09:44

cool lyrics not your best though and GODDD DAMN!! how much songs do you write a day :o
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: Negative

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 9th, '08, 10:30

well u see im a rap addict... i write between 1 - 5 a day, no bullshit and when i finish writing em i post the ones i like on here
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Negative

Postby Xray » Mar 9th, '08, 10:37

wooo-ow your a talented lyricist...you can be a good ghost writer :shifty:

i wonder for who :shifty:
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Re: Negative

Postby Epidemik » Mar 9th, '08, 11:05

Xray wrote:cool lyrics not your best though and GODDD DAMN!! how much songs do you write a day :o

word!
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