chicken scratch pt 4 (gangsta)

[Epidemik]

little bit of a gangsta feel to this one..
im not gangsta.. will never b gangsta..
just wanted to fuck around with the pen a bit.
leave your thoughts plz!

Epidemik's my name and hip hop is my game //
im at the top and always hot like propaine -
when im droppin flames //i aint gonna stop or sustain //
cuz hearin me is like an electric shock of watts through your veins //
at the top ill remain // top spot in this game //
iv got it locked and restrained, iv shocked and amazed //
and aint no way im gonna stop or delay //
i came all this way this shit is not gonna change //
my plot's to gain and rein // bust shots not complain //
twelve o'clock on the dot you'll get popped when i aim //
outlined in chalk on the sidwalk im insane //
thers no shame but just a shot from a glock at long range //

[Steve Spag]

Dope drop man! The begining was a little rough in my opinion, but it came through very niceley. I liked the flow for it alot. Sooooo keep it up dude

[M-Pyre]

Dope drop man! The begining was a little rough in my opinion, but it came through very niceley. I liked the flow for it alot. Sooooo keep it up dude

he said it already, keep it up

[Tash8]

ehh it's has it's goods and bads, like the rhyme scheme and flow was on point but it was VERY repetitive...

the rhymes were kinda simple excluding the syllables, umm overall it's not bad

keep at it.

[Xray]

i like it, good drop bro

[Epidemik]

thanks for the feed all!!

apprecieate it!