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We Aint Free

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We Aint Free

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 9th, '08, 12:48

We aint free, we may never will be i'm afraid but we'll see
but in these days we're building us ways to flee from wilting

that is key to this maze but leaders are guilty for redeeming the filthy
so filtering proceeds to decrease any means of the spilled beans from releasing

well i'm filling the pieces for my dream, don't delete me
by killing my aim, i'm still in this game revealing my faith im believing

these skills i have claimed out the fields i've trained in
and until my dead end date, im healing and aidin human beings
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: We Aint Free

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 10th, '08, 00:01

This was kind of a dissappointment but I liked the concept keep at it :whistle:
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Re: We Aint Free

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 10th, '08, 04:37

ok, i have more for this piece but i kept it out, i turned this into a twisted concept at the end but decided to leave it out, maybe i should've deleted it... thanx for ur feed
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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