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All I Have (Redone lines and added more)

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All I Have (Redone lines and added more)

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 10th, '08, 09:29

im gonna give all I have into making this work
and I aint breaking my word
im exchanging the worst
so i can turn to the greater things on this earth
ima live as i plan
and thru the aches that do hurt
ima aim to reverse to expand
let me explain in this verse
i got a gift in demand
from my brain i disperse
to get an upperhand
for a change from this turf
i must maintain understand
it's not a game, it's my birth
Uncle Sam aint worth
handin him my name for the dirt
Afghanistan remains to mature
while pain does emerge
my strength and my courage
Send me back with a tan
to USA, ditch the surface sand
i think i'll surf
the waves, ya heard
i'll bring my fans my world
my crazy plans and my curse
to save our land out satan's urge
plantin his hate undeserved
cuz a bad fate could occur
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: All I Have (Redone lines and added more)

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 12th, '08, 01:01

This was pretty dope all of it when I read it agiain anyway when i did read it agian I caught the flow so it really is dope fo sho
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