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All I Need

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All I Need

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 11th, '08, 18:20

all i need is a boost to give my body some juice or like a robot i'll be
and no one would see what i could do
i'll show y'all emcees im someone who grew up, now im free from the truth buddy
cuz i blew up, without me around, things are dull
cuz im so funny, i've gotten outta control
like im sloppy drunk from alcohol, what's the toll, don't i know?
oh, you're not comfortable cuz im jumping obstacles?
well im on a roll, i can't stop my flow, geronimo
look out below because im coming down like woah!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: All I Need

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 12th, '08, 00:46

still kinda disappointed why aint you droppin ill shit I know your better than this whats the deal man
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Re: All I Need

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 12th, '08, 04:20

i've been pretty busy and this is my writing quickly, it is pretty much how i've been freestylin, i edited a lot in and out
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: All I Need

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 12th, '08, 08:51

well, i had a feeling about receiving negative feedbacks and im actually glad, that means we're on the same plain... this has that pop tone to it, i didnt like it for what it was, i just knew the flow went pretty smooth and i tried to put a lil weirdness in it... im going to get more abstract if i can so u guys can see how i used to write... at least i would like to for a lil bit if my mind allows to...

thanx guys
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Re: All I Need

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 12th, '08, 15:47

Well if thats freestyle then I aint so dissappointed
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