Spittin fire, still

[Purple23Haze]

Like hoes that spit out seamen
Ima spit out fire like a bout it bout it demon
You need ta be loudly believen
That im reachin a new level
Im a true rebel a real devil
Im a boulder my rhymes r lil pebbles
Let it be known Im set in stone
Im full grown this is my own
May it be reaped n may it be sown
Im in my zone Im a king on his throne
N I wont be over thrown over my very own...lyrics
Serious u gonna be wary at home, hear this!
Cuz I might come thru
Dunz u, punk u, u flunked school
But its my fault cuz I cant instruct fools
When Im rappin its like thunder clappin
Im just reactin to the earths charges
n thats when it happens, a well worth it artist
Has the satisfaction of his action in his back pack n
Dentyne fires blastin my mouth with spicy breath
So you know when I spit its hot to death

I'd appreciate some feed back!

[Ka0t1c]

its decent but only for some freestylin material

[Purple23Haze]

Thanx guys yo McMaybe what did you mean maybe like that it could be descent for some freestyle material, for real though tell me what you really think!