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A Quick Verse I Just Wrote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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A Quick Verse I Just Wrote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby preest » Mar 13th, '08, 23:40

This only took about 15 mins so go easy on me ha ha


I used to sit and watch t.v. and smoke weed
pass out, and dream of contracting H.I.V.
I can't wait til' I see, my work mates die bleeding
or get taped up and raped by two gay guys screaming (ha ha ha)
oh I've made a mistake, I can't help it
make statements regarding the cards that I'm delt with
I've felt sick since I was twelve and held six
of the 10 bells I'll belt right out of them pricks
know the devils tricks to be able to trick the devil
I've peddled my energy to prove myself with no meddles
You can't claim I'm missing a brain, my fate's lame
when we slave away at making a name and great fame
purples haze and the acid rain takes away the pain
I'ma stay insane to the grave, this shit gonna change
I menacane, menacing, now what you wanna call it?
I sit talking to myself while I'm squatting on the toilet
I'm not to be toyed with, Hip Hop I just destroyed it
so get your boys, but once your in it you can't avoid it
I'm travelling, see my childhood slowly unravelling
I'm gambling, scrambling with my foes missing like Madaline
enemies vanishing off the face of this planet and
I can't stand it the games damaged, and I'm the first to panic
so I just tilt my head back and I take an Ex-Lax
lay in bed, crap my pants like I've taken 10 packs
oh man thats wack my house has been ransacked
they've taken my pans, pads, and 10 bags of anthrax
the youth aint even understanding what I'm saying
who I'm sleighing, their just laying back to keep the music playing
I'm preying, but theres only demons thats responding
so I'm fond of em' the angels wont appear so now we're bonding
it seems like no-ones corresponding, I ponder on my feelings
we beefing but on the real the knowlage is in the reading


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Re: A Quick Verse I Just Wrote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby M-Pyre » Mar 13th, '08, 23:49

you are good, no wait, your better!!!

and thats that!
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Re: A Quick Verse I Just Wrote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby jigglinj » Mar 14th, '08, 00:35

thas super aw esome! :worship:
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Re: A Quick Verse I Just Wrote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby preest » Mar 15th, '08, 14:13

STILL UPPIN' ON FEED
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