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im improvin my music

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 14th, '08, 18:17

you're clueless but the truth is i'm improvin thru Lucifer's influence on the youth and
my future to push with, producin my music from acoustics to commute rather than mute
i'm on a path for solutions, after the traps which pollute
i wanna battle with better execution than the past could handle
so i am the newest rapper unravelling the answers as i travel
by cancelling the mass confusion that broadcasts illusion put on the cameras, i'll
introduce ya, just interview once then my distribution's gonna hit channels
so ask your students who's the baddest dude in the mass of hip hop
i cast a shadow huger than the "big shots" cuz i'm Freddy Kruger to their Hanson's Mmmbop

(if i were well known this statement would be true)
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: im improvin my music

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 14th, '08, 21:31

you're clueless but the truth is i'm improvin thru Lucifer's influence on the youth and
my future to push with, producin my music from acoustics to commute rather than mute


It was all pretty tight I like the rhyme scheme but the beggining was my favorite cheers :b:
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