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Postby xariuss » Mar 15th, '08, 06:19

i'm sorry kids, i'm so sorry to be saying this
this is anything but a simple and plain diss
so listen up, get your adrenaline shots and shoot em up
cause you're going want to loosen up
such amusin stuff, wanna hear my thoughts?
wanna see through the eyes of a demon's corpse?
so demented so please if not keen abort!
been in war before your ass was even semen whore
a totally ill-faced flow only ever seen indoors
since birth only ever taught to clean the floors
slave driven to insanity through the pain enforced
by an owner who lures little girls to his red painted porche



just a lil something i wrote up real quick after hearing a cool beat(soo bored)
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Re: PlipPlap

Postby Wallace » Mar 15th, '08, 15:35

I felt it a little off the flow on the ending. Maybe it's just me. If considerated the fact that you did it bored then it's cool, we don't have the best thoughts when we bored. :p
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