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* Hip Hop's Lyrical Prowess (Winner Anounced )

Postby yoshi » Mar 20th, '08, 14:25

These are the verses I've received from you guys.

1. wrote:I battle thru diversity cuz i am very versatile in this universe with style
i've got lyrical prowess, that's courage n power while im currently overseas

i just had my first anniversary, now its certainly worse on me, it's nerve wrecking
but i wont coward, i've learned something about this personally from the doubters

i've come out so free, encountered those men from 2001 when the twin towers took hits
because i went Army, yet civilians never see these villains which we rid partially

oh, i've been targeting Talibans periodically to defend battalions and our companies
no medallions are even found on me but my momma doesnt look down on me cuz shes really proud of me

i put up with a lot honestly, i wanna live non stop in my odyssey
and then possibly get to the top in the hip hop colony...



2. wrote:E! True Hollywood-The Timeline
eva since the beginin wen Dmc's shit kept spinin "n" winnin
over millions of hearts real deep inside of harlem n bronx,
hip hop has been the real media centre of attention so heres a
lesson,its a time line, this is the E! true hollywood impression,c bak then
dance tracks had little raps,n kids break danced to grandmaster
flash wearin their best adidas tracks while spinin bak ta bak,here's anotha
flashy fact,a couple years went by n then came gangsta rap,that was insane
"fuck ploice n their fukin guns and cane's,i'll rip 'em,all i need is a fukin knife n chain,i need brain",next came the "reality of life" 2 pac,em,nas n a few like obie trice,but instead pure wackness emerged n now we've declared hip hop as dead.

A few short notes:
harlem n bronx:were declared as areas were real hip hop actually started.
Little raps:back then all jazzy jay n grandmaster flash tracks were like club anthems now,all they has was fast beats n a little rap to go along with it.
Hip hop is dead:Nas said this back in 2006.



3. wrote:Superior skills drop to the floor once i face the mic/
quicker than any Mike, i advise you get far and take a hike/
kuz im so sick i cause earthquakes when i write/
I equal Lyrical prowess ,you dudes just hate on my life/
sharper than any knife, i lyrically stab at you cats/
laugh at you fagz, just look at half of my raps/
you be pattin mah back, impressed at the fact/
that this man took the mean path of rap/
but i only see half you clap, kuz the rest just hate/
kuz when i battle, i dont really battle, i RAPE/



4. wrote:I got superior skill, nearing ya, bearing tha, real lyrical prowess/
On the net, I got a dozen ID’s (idea’s), but still I live on so thoughtless/
Rawness, caught in a authors claws, caused by talking soft/
Locked off, like I’ve fallen in my coffin that’s auctioned off/
Undergoing a toxic wash, spit venom in any direction. Sparking tall/
You can’t be as real as this, syllabic lyricist, tilting the pistol/
With a little simple written principle, which is to kill the innocent /
Oeps, I meant the ignorant, keeping the equilibrium within a rhythm/
This is just another example of a typical minimal effort /
That today’s standards, strip the pickle to a shit full of sickening records/

And that’s why I’m here!
Maybe wrote:I'm so awesome, I don't mind looking desperate.

Chet wrote:Fuck House. If I wanted to watch a sarcastic person in the medical field, I would stalk Yoshi :8)
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Re: Hip Hop's Lyrical Prowess

Postby C-Game » Mar 20th, '08, 14:31

BAR , XRAY , NS STart votin ASAP...

vote in theses

Message Delivered (topic ) -
Structure /Flow -
Rhymes /Multies -
Complexity -
Other -

every cat out of 10

for each drop...
and add them up and send ur scoresheet to yoshi.....
once ur done votin POST IN THIS THREAD tellin ur DONE...
once all 4 are done... we will tally it up and post the 2 winners...
and the people who pariticpated DO NOT POST IN HERE or YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED>..
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Re: * Hip Hop's Lyrical Prowess (START VOTING NOW )

Postby SajN » Mar 20th, '08, 17:25

VOTED!!!
! Is He Nuts? No, He's InSajN !
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Re: * Hip Hop's Lyrical Prowess (START VOTING NOW )

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 21st, '08, 00:49

Do I get to vote
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Re: * Hip Hop's Lyrical Prowess (START VOTING NOW )

Postby C-Game » Mar 21st, '08, 05:59

Purple23Haze wrote:Do I get to vote


did u participate.? have u ever posted any lyrics here on CW?
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Re: * Hip Hop's Lyrical Prowess (START VOTING NOW )

Postby C-Game » Mar 27th, '08, 10:04

voted
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Re: * Hip Hop's Lyrical Prowess (START VOTING NOW )

Postby C-Game » Apr 16th, '08, 10:11

will announce the 2 winners on this topic tonight,..,
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Re: * Hip Hop's Lyrical Prowess (START VOTING NOW )

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 16th, '08, 23:48

Yea I have posted lyrics here on CW no I didn't particapate but honestly all of em were wack so never mind

I got superior skill, eerie words fill...the room with, feel me...more feelings
Than any one is dealing, with...killing the gift cats stealing the print
I'm billing for this! fuck copyright, extortionist, pealin your wigs...if
You don't pay up you better stay up cause I'm on my way up...and if
you aint awake trust, I'll bust, a spray of, flesh ripping off your make up
Ya'll is fakers drags fag rapers, ass ate what, I'm losin it but wait, what?
I come back with the who FUCK you think runs this shit from behind the scenes
I'm behind you always I hear your screams it's not helping I hear you yelling
Your failing to connect with yourself your failing to respect yourself
Your failing to accept yourself so SHUT THE FUCK UP when I say GO let yourself
You can't even successfully express yourselves I suspect your dwelt dealt by the devil himself
And you know what else I secretly have the most felt speech with my mental outlets
Talk about lyrical prowess I'll have you all powerless in less than an hour shh...
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Re: * Hip Hop's Lyrical Prowess (START VOTING NOW )

Postby Arabian Shady » Apr 22nd, '08, 18:04

so much for lettin us know who won.. :n:
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: * Hip Hop's Lyrical Prowess (START VOTING NOW )

Postby C-Game » Apr 25th, '08, 18:50

NAME - 1

Message Delivered (topic ) - 6
Structure /Flow - 8
Rhymes /Multies - 8
Complexity - 6
Other - Nice start, one line towards the end was a bit long. 6
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Name - 2

Message Delivered (topic ) - 6
Structure /Flow - 4
Rhymes /Multies - 5
Complexity - 4
Other -didn't enjoy this one so much. 5
24


Name - 3

Message Delivered (topic ) - 5
Structure /Flow - 8
Rhymes /Multies - 8
Complexity - 7
Other - lol at last line. 7

35

Name - 4

Message Delivered (topic ) - 6
Structure /Flow - 8
Rhymes /Multies - 9
Complexity - 7
Other - 8

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MY VOTE

1
Message Delivered (topic ) - 6
Structure /Flow - 5
Rhymes /Multies - 6 ( good multies were here and there but the end rhymes not workin didnt do fine )
Complexity - 5
Other - average 6
28

2
Message Delivered (topic ) - 7 ... i liked the way u did it
Structure /Flow - 4 didnt get to me.. sorry
Rhymes /Multies - 5
Complexity - 5
Other -7 nice ender ....
28

3
Message Delivered (topic ) - 6
Structure /Flow - 8
Rhymes /Multies - 7
Complexity - good transition at 6th bar.. 6
Other - 6
33

4
Message Delivered (topic ) - 7
Structure /Flow - 7
Rhymes /Multies - 7
Complexity - 8 .. good vocab in here
Other - 7 7th line was kool
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THIS COMPETITION WON BY PERSON 4...
WHO EVER IT IS POST HERE
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Re: * Hip Hop's Lyrical Prowess (Winner Anounced )

Postby M-Pyre » Apr 26th, '08, 00:06

it was me :D



yessssss I've won the first round baby :smoking:

thnk you both for voting
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Re: * Hip Hop's Lyrical Prowess (Winner Anounced )

Postby C-Game » Apr 26th, '08, 04:21

cool...
wonder whos number 3....
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Re: * Hip Hop's Lyrical Prowess (Winner Anounced )

Postby M-Pyre » May 3rd, '08, 13:01

ok when will we start again?......(and this time get some judges that will be here when they have to vote, not absent!) :)
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Re: * Hip Hop's Lyrical Prowess (Winner Anounced )

Postby C-Game » May 4th, '08, 06:01

C-Game wrote:cool...
wonder whos number 3....


so far we have marth , rain and mpyre...

as i said WHO is NUMBER 3 ???
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Re: * Hip Hop's Lyrical Prowess (Winner Anounced )

Postby M-Pyre » May 5th, '08, 00:21

I dono :unsure:
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