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Inside Rains Brain

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 21st, '08, 03:13

they say I've already lost what u Call Yur Mind
probably cuz I'm not motivated by Dollar Signs

if u ask me this accusation doesn't Add Up
a man with nothing to lose will get At Ya

nowadays it seems like all I ever See Is Death
all I know is I won't be tha one Defeated Next

don't question my flow I'm at full Capability
I make tha fake rappers Hate Tha Skill Of Me

problems are growing fast we don't Need Hesitation
hip hop is dead but I'm tha independant Recessatation

I won't risk it all thats how tha Fiends Act
if I say I have green on me I don't Mean Cash

I'll be tha first one to trip if there's a Snitch in Tha House
my lesser self would be unleashing whole Clips in Ya Mouth

lyrically homicidal at last tha news can Auction Them Reports
who needs a silencer my critics won't be Talking Anymore

Air Carries Clues about when I Share Very Cruel methods to Bare Buried Fools Resting Places
no Second Takes Kid I Mention Haste With a view of these Pending Cases not Ending Gracious

a Pen N Paper I'm Sensing Haters u all know my Bic Be With These Tight Soldier Rhymes
I End Writing Utencils Then to Enlighten U Gentlemen I stay Busy Kiddies Like Overtime

word to me this is Burkes Fight there's no need to Search Twice cuz I'm Shooting Out Truth
taking Tha Nets Respect Ya Left Perplexed Ta Guess Whats Next know what I'm Doing Now Dude
Last edited by Rain Matrix on Mar 21st, '08, 17:07, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Inside Rains Brain

Postby jigglinj » Mar 21st, '08, 04:46

coooooooool! :8)
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Re: Inside Rains Brain

Postby Arabian Shady » Mar 21st, '08, 07:28

that was pretty good man!
and as u said i did loose the flow at the beginnin but i managed to catch up wid it afterall

I'll be tha first one to trip if there's a Snitch in Tha House
my lesser self would be unleashing whole Clips in Ya Mouth


^^ that was the illest part right there

peace :b:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Inside Rains Brain

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 21st, '08, 17:08

thank u Arabian Shady I liked that line too...

I took out tha extra line to make it flow better

thanks to jigglinj for yur feedback too...

peace
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Re: Inside Rains Brain

Postby Jay-19 » Mar 22nd, '08, 15:57

Good shit dude! A lot of good rhymes and I feel the lyrics. well done!

don't question my flow I'm at full Capability
I make tha fake rappers Hate Tha Skill Of Me


That's the best one! :y: :smoking:
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Re: Inside Rains Brain

Postby Xplode » Mar 23rd, '08, 16:16

nowadays it seems like all I ever See Is Death
all I know is I won't be tha one Defeated Next


i like it :)

nice flow Rain :y:
So Long Bitch U Did Me So Wrong
I Dont Want To Go On
Living In This World Without
You...........
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Re: Inside Rains Brain

Postby Wallace » Mar 23rd, '08, 19:04

That's good. Not motivated my dollar sings, doin' better that the motivated by dollar sings. :8) Nice multies as alaways. :y:
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Re: Inside Rains Brain

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 25th, '08, 00:16

I'm doing an audio to this with added lyrics... :-({|=
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Re: Inside Rains Brain

Postby SajN » Mar 26th, '08, 18:40

As always it's a good drop :y:
You have dope rhymes :y:
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Re: Inside Rains Brain

Postby Xplode » Mar 27th, '08, 05:16

Rain Matrix wrote:I'm doing an audio to this with added lyrics... :-({|=


whered i get link to tat cello rain
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I Dont Want To Go On
Living In This World Without
You...........
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