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Re: New track I'm working on

Postby Xray » Mar 21st, '08, 07:54

cool piece just alil basic AND your so damn right about that website things dudes on here do :y:
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Re: New track I'm working on

Postby Xray » Mar 21st, '08, 08:03

Chet wrote:
Xray wrote:cool piece just alil basic AND your so damn right about that website things dudes on here do :y:


thanks man, I know it's a lil basic but it's got some good punches

http://www.rhymezone.com a online rappers best friend :tounge2:

haha whats the point of using words you dont come up wid though?
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Re: New track I'm working on

Postby Xray » Mar 21st, '08, 08:13

bad boy :spank: use your brain dont use diddys style :spank:
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Re: New track I'm working on

Postby Xray » Mar 21st, '08, 08:23

Chet wrote:but but but...I Don't Write Rhymes, I Write Checks :shadywink:

:laughing: than write me one :angry:
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Re: New track I'm working on

Postby Xray » Mar 21st, '08, 08:38

Chet wrote:*writes check to x for one million dollars, but makes it so he can only cash it in 2040*

no complaints man props :worship: :worship:


*grabs a customized ak 47 with larger bullets*

tries to survive till 2040 :angry:
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Re: New track I'm working on

Postby Xray » Mar 21st, '08, 08:43

*clicks options and than turns the bulletproof shield*

try it now bitch :angry:
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Re: New track I'm working on

Postby Xray » Mar 21st, '08, 09:00

* i choose charazard*

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Re: New track I'm working on

Postby Xray » Mar 21st, '08, 09:05

chases chet :twisted:
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Re: New track I'm working on

Postby shady_soldier_ » Mar 21st, '08, 12:38

...I had no idea there was a website that helped come up with rhymes.
...WTF, that is so dumb.
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Re: New track I'm working on

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 21st, '08, 13:19

lol @ you even knowing about that sites, thats gay :n:

and i can bet by a miracle the rappers on this site are goni be start being more lyrical coz they have seen that site now :n:


oh and lol @ you sajjad, your being a hypocrit man

Xray wrote:haha whats the point of using words you dont come up wid though?



tash finished of a verse for you on the prequel if im right in saying :whistle:
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Re: New track I'm working on

Postby Xray » Mar 22nd, '08, 03:04

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:lol @ you even knowing about that sites, thats gay :n:

and i can bet by a miracle the rappers on this site are goni be start being more lyrical coz they have seen that site now :n:


oh and lol @ you sajjad, your being a hypocrit man

Xray wrote:haha whats the point of using words you dont come up wid though?



tash finished of a verse for you on the prequel if im right in saying :whistle:

yeah true..but tash is a partner in rhyme and production..that site is nuttin to me :y:
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Re: New track I'm working on

Postby Robbie G » Mar 22nd, '08, 04:19

I really liked it man, one of you better verses. :worship:

your a broke ass bubble gum rapper, shit belongs in the crapper
this is for the weezy f baby, number 1 rapper bitch crazy
your lyrical style only means your lazy, bitch fade away
your dj might diss my daily, but in the club the bitch play me


Really liked this part, thought it faded a little at the end though.
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Re: New track I'm working on

Postby Robbie G » Mar 23rd, '08, 03:35

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:lol @ you even knowing about that sites, thats gay :n:

and i can bet by a miracle the rappers on this site are goni be start being more lyrical coz they have seen that site now :n:


I've known about that site for awhile. It's actually a nice way when you first start to get into the rhythm of things. After awhile it just takes the fun out of writing though.
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Re: New track I'm working on

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 23rd, '08, 11:51

Shady Babie wrote:
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:lol @ you even knowing about that sites, thats gay :n:

and i can bet by a miracle the rappers on this site are goni be start being more lyrical coz they have seen that site now :n:


I've known about that site for awhile. It's actually a nice way when you first start to get into the rhythm of things. After awhile it just takes the fun out of writing though.



exactly, were's the challenge of progression if you dont need to work for it.

its more rewarding when you use a dictionary, or thesarous and stumble upon sick words/rhymes/wordplay lol

@ chet, i aint read the peice, but i will sooner or later lol :sweating:
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Re: New track I'm working on

Postby Tash8 » Mar 24th, '08, 15:07

if you have to look in that site for rhymes then the fact is ur just writing randomly and ur just finding things that rhyme and things that could fit into your track...

makes you go off-topic real easy, i suggest not doing that, for your own help.

P.S. i've used that site too but i've used it for thesaurus not the rhyming shit
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