They call us on our shit still tryin ta boost they hit

[Purple23Haze]

I'm not the usual lie
cause I know...
its not always suitable skies
But we all have mutual eyes
So try to see the beautiful side
I got moveable lines new to this life
True to my sights sight set on the light
I'm bound to die but I'm tied to life
I WILL leave my imprint don't be ignorant
Theres a name for what I am for instance
I'm a man I stand for the grand scheme
The bigger picture so thats how I plan things
I'm a quicker flipper than the famous Dolphin
Its a game so I think of it as poker n I'm all in...
three aces a wild joker whatever got I'm callin
I'll take you on some dream works incohoots with walden..media
stupercallafragalickdick onamonapia
with a swift kick you on gonna be what

I case your wondering about the title recently I heard that we don't call our self murders or ganster so they aint never heard of us wankers. right! They say were liars then we don't lie then they say we aint nobody FUCK THAT THEIRS MORE OF US THEN THEIR ARE OF THEM SO COME ON!

[Makaveli525]

That is tight...

And you have some lyrical talent goin on fa real...

But the structure was crazy... how anybody gonna spit that? All lines are different lengths

[Purple23Haze]

They'll either mock me spittin it or I'll spit it!

I edited it see if thats a better read

[Rain Matrix]

this was a nice read man... keep tha sick rhymes coming

[J Roc]

"I'm not the usual lie
cause I know...
its not always suitable skies
But we all have mutual eyes
So try to see the beautiful side"

I Felt That ... Haha Chea, I See U Man ... Keep That Kinda Ish Up

[Ka0t1c]

True to my sights sight set on the light

i think that doesn't belong there...
there's some more slight errors too if u look closely...but

it's pretty good, it can be better tho towards the end...still

i definitely like how it flows
it's original
got good vocab
nice set of multies