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Mad Game Part 1

Postby shadyallday » Mar 24th, '08, 14:48

i got a couple of these done so far, mad game part 1 and 2, heres part 1 give me some feedback...

who got more game than me/ damn Alicia Keys got a venereal disease/ shes actin like i'm no one, she hatin me/ thats why i had to run game on Amerie/ when i saw her at the bakery she didn't have 1 Thing to say to me/ i got all these chicks givin me head/ they suck so hard, i got Pink turning red/ she said i was Trouble when i layed her on my bed/ maybe it was something i said/ i got Raven Symone cravin for bone/ i even got Hilary Duff givin me stuff/ whatever i do to het it'll be rough/ i got Tweet tweedlin her thumbs/ she was like Oops! when she made me cum/ do u really think i'm a big shot/ just cause i got Pamela Anderson callin me Kid Rock/ last night she was like damn u got a big cock/ don't be ashamed/ its not my fault i got mad game/

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all these chicks know i got mad game/ its a damn shame how i got Beyonce Sayin my Name/ all the haters are sayin i'm lame/ i'm gettin all these chicks because of the fame/

i took Many Moore to the cand store/ she gave me everything i was askin for/ all i remember was her sayin damn its sore/ i even got Britney sayin gimme gimme more/ now shes callin me obnoxious/ i cant help that her pussy was Toxic/ it didn't stop her from touchin my dick through my boxers/ i got Stacie Orrico givin me deep throat/ now she avoids me like i got BO/ that cheap ho would do anything for a mink coat/ i gave Thalia ganaria/ man u gotta see her/ mira, she loves my onomatopeia/ sometimes i just wanna leave her/

Ima get in my whip and just pull out/ i wanted to fuck the Olsen twins but i already had a Full House/ last night didnt go so well/ i fucked Paris Hilton in her own hotel. i dont know why she got offended when the soap fell/ she was like she wanted to be my wife/ and show me the Simple Life/ i told her i wanted to be liberal, so we had a miserable night/ this has been an awesome week/ i met mad girls while i was walkin the streets/ i slept with Angelina Jolie and that chick from Dawson's Creek/ it feels good to finally get off my feet/

it was a metter of time till i rammed Amanda Bynes from behind/ shes so refined/ shes havin a kid but it can't be mine/ this chick wants her panties signed/ no bitch im not asenine/ i can still write hot shit even passed my prime/ even J-LO lets me touch her ass sometimes/ yeah im a mastermind/ i told Eve that love cant be blind/ maybe my pimp juice is useless/ i got no ass from Stacey Dash cause i called her Clueless/ Ashanti let me Rain on Her/ everything i said sounded strange to her/ she had thick eyebrows i told her to shave the fur/ silly faggot dicks r for chicks/ in other words, theres no limit to how many chicks i can get/
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Re: Mad Game Part 1

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 24th, '08, 14:55

this was creative writing at it's best...
well if hormones controlled my pen... lol JK
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Re: Mad Game Part 1

Postby Arabian Shady » Mar 24th, '08, 17:38

i liked it man
funny,good flow,creative
good piece alltogether
peace
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50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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