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Re: Im A Soldier Lyrics

Postby Big Proof 4ever » Mar 24th, '08, 18:17

cool lyrics :worship:
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Re: Im A Soldier Lyrics

Postby Rap Dogg » Mar 24th, '08, 19:18

Nice lyrics,it's all cool.Just a bit of stronger voice an it's 10.For now,it's 9/10.Keep it goin.Stay cool an keep it real.Respect
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Re: Im A Soldier Lyrics

Postby Big Proof 4ever » Mar 24th, '08, 19:31

u are fuckin killer dude,enjoyed ur song since 1sec tilll the end :y: great job :worship:
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Re: Im A Soldier Lyrics

Postby shady_soldier_ » Mar 24th, '08, 20:24

daaaamn. that's really well done.
great job! :worship:
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Re: Im A Soldier Lyrics

Postby Tash8 » Mar 24th, '08, 20:58

i loved this song man

and my fav lines were these:
fuck a beef, im cookin up a gourmet steak,
your four mates take, your four mates, and form eight plates

def. feeling it, i love the flow as well... very impressive.
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Re: Im A Soldier Lyrics

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 24th, '08, 21:45

awesome track :smoking:
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Re: Im A Soldier Lyrics

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 24th, '08, 22:57

I can't hate... I won't hate... I liked it...

keep doing it man
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Re: Im A Soldier Lyrics

Postby Steve Spag » Mar 25th, '08, 00:04

Sick track. The actual audio was real tight. Good flow.
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Re: Im A Soldier Lyrics

Postby Crazy Sycho » Mar 25th, '08, 01:07

ive had this on my media player for a while
thanks for remindin me
ever since i heard this song i wanted more...
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Re: Im A Soldier Lyrics

Postby M-Pyre » Mar 25th, '08, 01:29

put it up for download, I need this song!!!!

question, did you make the beat, and was it you who recorded it?

when are you dropping a mixtape or an album for that matter?!

lyrics are tight as hell

but you gotta make this a download man

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Re: Im A Soldier Lyrics

Postby Xray » Mar 25th, '08, 10:24

lyrics are nice :y: just your voice is alil soft..if it was deeper alil...it would of been a genious job :y:
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Re: Im A Soldier Lyrics

Postby Tash8 » Mar 25th, '08, 21:23

Xray wrote:lyrics are nice :y: just your voice is alil soft..if it was deeper alil...it would of been a genious job :y:


no, his voice was perfect on this, you have just a style that u want everything dark or deeper

but the way he changes his voice at some points is what makes this song great.
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Re: Im A Soldier Lyrics

Postby Xray » Mar 26th, '08, 03:27

Tash8 wrote:
Xray wrote:lyrics are nice :y: just your voice is alil soft..if it was deeper alil...it would of been a genious job :y:


no, his voice was perfect on this, you have just a style that u want everything dark or deeper

but the way he changes his voice at some points is what makes this song great.

ok what ever..i was just giving my opinion to him not you :p
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Re: Im A Soldier Lyrics

Postby Tash8 » Mar 26th, '08, 04:30

Xray wrote:
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Xray wrote:lyrics are nice :y: just your voice is alil soft..if it was deeper alil...it would of been a genious job :y:


no, his voice was perfect on this, you have just a style that u want everything dark or deeper

but the way he changes his voice at some points is what makes this song great.

ok what ever..i was just giving my opinion to him not you :p


yea but ur opinion on everything is it needs to be dark, u and c-riz are the same about that

everything has to be darkish, and c-riz wants a darkish club shit which i dont even understand lol...

so i see why you dont feel his voice on this but it's because of that ^
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Re: Im A Soldier Lyrics

Postby Xray » Mar 26th, '08, 10:24

Tash8 wrote:yea but ur opinion on everything is it needs to be dark, u and c-riz are the same about that

everything has to be darkish, and c-riz wants a darkish club shit which i dont even understand lol...

so i see why you dont feel his voice on this but it's because of that ^

wtf? :confusion: i listen to mobb deep ALOT and there music is NOT dark..

just cause my upcoming album is called the dark days..doesn't mean i only enjoy dark music :n:

and how you got dark from me saying deep is even more stupid.

and now all the sudden your attacking c-riz? cause he asked you to make him a dark/clubbish beat?

and if you don't know what a dark/clubbish beat is, than you haven't heard "Welcome To Detroit City" by Eminem & Trick Trick :n:
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