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Postby Rap Dogg » Mar 24th, '08, 19:34

Aiyo,I hop on the stage,
grab the mic,start killin,drop off ma rage.
If I have an idea,I pop off to say,
so you notice.
Throw me a bad comment,I throw vommit.
Hop on ma dick,bitch done?Get off it.
When I fuck you up,you be smaller than hobbit.
This people make me nauseous.
That's why I do this,an I'll continue till the day I'm closed in a coffin.
Have a problem with me?Better say we solved it.
I give shape to the words till I make a masterpiece.
Diss me an be sure you gonna be stopped,fast decease.
After it,don't think you gonna rest in peace,
I'll be spillin lines above your grave,
I'm not chasin money,I think it's love for fame,
tellin you're a wild beast,see how I got you tamed.
Charge me,accuse me,suck ma dick,FUCK THE BLAME.
I worked for this skills,now I got them locked an framed,
on ma livin room wall,
I'm crazy,or just retarded?I don't know,I just heard a spiritual call,
I made ma willin to fit in ma balls,
there's no cheap shots,I'm hittin it tall.
Now beg for mercy,
go home,grab your purse ''G'',
tell me somethin I don't know about this world,BITCH...
WHEN I GRAB A PENCIL AND SQUEEZE IT BETWEEN FINGERS,I'M NOT A RAPPER,I'M A DEMON WHO SPEAKS ENGLISH,FREAK GENIUS
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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 24th, '08, 21:41

well it can get u down Quick if u Let It
pound a Snitch and send um to tha Medic
money is paper and we all know that Burns Fast
there are more important things u'll Learn That
some talk about Guns N Knifetips
looking for Something Like This
I won't go about Running Lifeless
soon I'll see my Seed grow from Me
before I Leave I'll set tha truth Free
we have no Need to Be dependant on their Oil
why are we in Iraq cuz to tha victor go tha Spoils
who gives a fuck if their Barrels Drop
it's all reserved they will Share No Stock
investments and money they Pair Those Off
it's sad to see cuz tha Rich Get Richer
I'll make sure their Hit With Scriptures
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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby Rap Dogg » Mar 24th, '08, 23:55

nice lines matrix.respect dawg. :b:
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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby shadyallday » Apr 17th, '08, 14:34

everybody's like i remind them of michael myers/ why? cause i wouldn't think twice to slice ur tires/ break into ur house and attack u with a butcher knife and pliers/ i would start a fire, but the fire would ignite a riot/ then i would have to explain to the firefighters, but they wouldn't buy it, especially when my cars blocking the fire hydrant/ i try to drive away, but i start a nine car pile up/ i would stop ur bleedin chin, but it would just bleed again/ i'm so disobedient/ i need a friend, i'm a demon seed, playin with hypodermic needles and pins?/sometimes i wonder fam, could i have been the son of sam?/ probably not, i'd go to shoot and my gun would jam/ and it would suck, cause i couldn't have called a mulligan/ i'ma act like Jack the Ripper/ i'ma backslap ur sister/ if i attack this kid, u'd overreact, and i would have to act fast, and slash ur wrists up/ u would have to be a slasher film buff/ to really know which way i would have to kill her/ maybe i could re-create Freddy and Jason/ u think i'ma malevolent rapist/ i would bring the machette, but its too heavy to wave it/i can't be held accountable for all the dead bodies u find on the pavementand all the dead bodies u found in my basement!/i guess i'm sorta like Norman Bates/ but i'd probably get off on a manslaughter case/ i don't think that much force, made the camcorder break/ i was bombed out of my gourd okay/ i'ma flee the scene in a white ford like O.J./ i don't think the glove will fit/ then u must acquit/ man u know i ain't do nothin kid/ u always blame me when u find something big/ i'll let him go, if he just submit, i have no reason for doing it, just for kicks/ he shoulda never let me in/ now theres a bloody mess, and i get arrested again, go in for questioning, and get sentenced to 10/ years but i have no regrets for what i did/ i'm like Dennis the Menace, in need of medicine, i'ma go relax i just got a seditive/


so let me know what u think man write me back peace...
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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby Rap Dogg » Apr 17th, '08, 23:08

dawg you crazy!!! :worship: :D if you ever wanna do a collabo,just holla.peace out
cheers man :b:
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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 18th, '08, 00:33

shadyallday wrote:everybody's like i remind them of michael myers/ why? cause i wouldn't think twice to slice ur tires/ break into ur house and attack u with a butcher knife and pliers/ i would start a fire, but the fire would ignite a riot/ then i would have to explain to the firefighters, but they wouldn't buy it, especially when my cars blocking the fire hydrant/ i try to drive away, but i start a nine car pile up/ i would stop ur bleedin chin, but it would just bleed again/ i'm so disobedient/ i need a friend, i'm a demon seed, playin with hypodermic needles and pins?/sometimes i wonder fam, could i have been the son of sam?/ probably not, i'd go to shoot and my gun would jam/ and it would suck, cause i couldn't have called a mulligan/ i'ma act like Jack the Ripper/ i'ma backslap ur sister/ if i attack this kid, u'd overreact, and i would have to act fast, and slash ur wrists up/ u would have to be a slasher film buff/ to really know which way i would have to kill her/ maybe i could re-create Freddy and Jason/ u think i'ma malevolent rapist/ i would bring the machette, but its too heavy to wave it/i can't be held accountable for all the dead bodies u find on the pavementand all the dead bodies u found in my basement!/i guess i'm sorta like Norman Bates/ but i'd probably get off on a manslaughter case/ i don't think that much force, made the camcorder break/ i was bombed out of my gourd okay/ i'ma flee the scene in a white ford like O.J./ i don't think the glove will fit/ then u must acquit/ man u know i ain't do nothin kid/ u always blame me when u find something big/ i'll let him go, if he just submit, i have no reason for doing it, just for kicks/ he shoulda never let me in/ now theres a bloody mess, and i get arrested again, go in for questioning, and get sentenced to 10/ years but i have no regrets for what i did/ i'm like Dennis the Menace, in need of medicine, i'ma go relax i just got a seditive/


so let me know what u think man write me back peace...




nice work eminem :y:
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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby Cwayon_Murder » Apr 18th, '08, 00:43

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:
shadyallday wrote:everybody's like i remind them of michael myers/ why? cause i wouldn't think twice to slice ur tires/ break into ur house and attack u with a butcher knife and pliers/ i would start a fire, but the fire would ignite a riot/ then i would have to explain to the firefighters, but they wouldn't buy it, especially when my cars blocking the fire hydrant/ i try to drive away, but i start a nine car pile up/ i would stop ur bleedin chin, but it would just bleed again/ i'm so disobedient/ i need a friend, i'm a demon seed, playin with hypodermic needles and pins?/sometimes i wonder fam, could i have been the son of sam?/ probably not, i'd go to shoot and my gun would jam/ and it would suck, cause i couldn't have called a mulligan/ i'ma act like Jack the Ripper/ i'ma backslap ur sister/ if i attack this kid, u'd overreact, and i would have to act fast, and slash ur wrists up/ u would have to be a slasher film buff/ to really know which way i would have to kill her/ maybe i could re-create Freddy and Jason/ u think i'ma malevolent rapist/ i would bring the machette, but its too heavy to wave it/i can't be held accountable for all the dead bodies u find on the pavementand all the dead bodies u found in my basement!/i guess i'm sorta like Norman Bates/ but i'd probably get off on a manslaughter case/ i don't think that much force, made the camcorder break/ i was bombed out of my gourd okay/ i'ma flee the scene in a white ford like O.J./ i don't think the glove will fit/ then u must acquit/ man u know i ain't do nothin kid/ u always blame me when u find something big/ i'll let him go, if he just submit, i have no reason for doing it, just for kicks/ he shoulda never let me in/ now theres a bloody mess, and i get arrested again, go in for questioning, and get sentenced to 10/ years but i have no regrets for what i did/ i'm like Dennis the Menace, in need of medicine, i'ma go relax i just got a seditive/


so let me know what u think man write me back peace...




nice work eminem :y:


Lmao I thought the same thing.
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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby Marsh devileny » Apr 18th, '08, 09:33

Hey I know he biting em’s style a little though I’m gone give it to him for being creative it’s the most creative peace posted in this thread yet
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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby nuke » Apr 18th, '08, 16:07

P.I.M.P but yall already know,
so Mifta creap slow, then let that thing go.
sqeeuze and release that stress,
front page press in the D,
now you under cover in the Bean with me,
shit still far from the movie screen.
but you know cuties gon scream soon as I step on the scene

got the fiends beggin for more
class ended couldnt finish
Y'ALL TRYNA BE THE KING. BUT THE ACE IS BACK
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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 18th, '08, 16:37

Marsh rhymes with Harsh tha drama he Starts will leave him in tha Dark
when my Bars give him a lyrical Scar right on his Heart he doesn't know Art

he's too busy Being Negative like he's steady Eating Sedatives
I mean look at tha suicide note he had no Reason Left ta Life

Listen u must be a Chicken yur Rhyming's Fowl
if u wanna Hate then go Date Simon Cowell

ohhhhhh!!! :wave:
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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby Marsh devileny » Apr 18th, '08, 18:47

Jesus what the f*** is you thinking? This lycril execution for your brain I’m bring
Yep! I checked yo page, and yep! I hate yo lines
Nope! you won’t get signed, if the deaf do translate rhyme, (yo) your foggy line's are weak, you can hardly hold a rhyme bitch! let alone speak

Wait! Wait!
I may be wrong… but on the mic, dude sound like a dike in a thong... :tounge2:
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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 18th, '08, 18:51

u won't battle me cuz I will HURT YA WORD TA to everything I love it'll be lyrical MURDA!!!
Cracker Rapper or em's Swagger Jacker yur signed to an indie label no ones ever HEARD OF!!!
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Postby Jay-19 » Apr 18th, '08, 19:04

Enough with the trash-talk, I'll get cuffed then I'll smash bars
Feeling tough when I crash cars, slash ya'll and bash stars
And from the get go I have been told to get them go gettas
I'm a go get them go gettas go getta, hoes better duck down
Get the fuck out! Take 12 steps back and you're drunk again
Got more funk in me than a bumping Benz, you're humping men
Haters gonna hate Jay more than ever with an AK-47
So make way for the better, cause I'm coming thru wilding
There's a little me in everyone, and even some in your diamonds


by the way, I'm Jay.
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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby Marsh devileny » Apr 18th, '08, 19:24

Rain Matrix wrote:u won't battle me cuz I will HURT YA WORD TA to everything I love it'll be lyrical MURDA!!!
Cracker Rapper or em's Swagger Jacker yur signed to an indie label no ones ever HEARD OF!!!


What the hell was that? you have to be the worst rapper I've ever head :happy: did you not read my post above? lol
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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby Rap Dogg » Apr 20th, '08, 01:23

okay kids,let's cut this child talks,
i'm not kiddin,i'm just tellin wild jokes,
look at ma rhymes an the way your eye pokes.
weak rhymes don't pass in this part of world,
only brave ones fight round here,no heart of girl.
ma lines got power to put your smarts in twirl.
you're messin with someone hideous,
this is reality,this ain no fun video.
you know i'll never be done,jus hit me more.
before i get more crazy an slit these whores.
situation gets complicated,it fits me more.
duck down bitch,hit the floor.
it ain gonna be enough time for you to skip to the doors.
hero again an this shit is solved
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