Northern Lights

[SajN]

"From the day I discovered this beautiful light
I felt I had the power and the spiritual inside
A lyrical vibe deciding to give it a try
A tribe of mics, I got the eager to write
And price the musics masterpiece,
The rap, hip-hop, the real arts are these
For them the place in my heart increased
And it started to beat cuz of rap, just for that,
It was my combustion, trust me,
I was nuthin’ without it
Just an ass and a rotten coward
but his rap power made me escape shit
so my life wouldn’t be wasted, it saved me
that’s why me and Jay-19 retaliates it,
by doin’ the same and praise it,
Raise it to the top within the northern lights
It’s Hip-Hop, so our countries will be modernized,
Yep, in Sweden and Norway, right!"


this ain't done yet... It's for a collab with Killah..

Any feedback, tips etc. is appreciated

[Rain Matrix]

hell yeah this is nice
good job man

[Xplode]

nice verse Inf.

[Xray]

A tribe of mics, I got the eager to write

best line

and nice verse man...i see improvement

[SajN]

@RainMatrix, thanks man, appreciate it

@Xplode, thanks man

@Xray, I know, it's a good line thank you


More feeds ?

[Arabian Shady]

thats pretty tite man
u've used sum multies,n the verse has meanin,wiked
gd job on this 1
peace

[SajN]

Thanks man


Someone who can feed ?

[Wallace]

Nice verse. Similar thing happened to me, if wasnt fo' hip-hop, I would be in a dark and depressive situation.

[SajN]

Nice verse. Similar thing happened to me, if wasnt fo' hip-hop, I would be in a dark and depressive situation.

Thanks
Sme with me, that's why this verse is like this

[SajN]

Bump?

[Hadez]

it's nice man
the rhyme scheme is as complex as i'd like it to be, but that's just my personal taste i guess.

pretty good, don't really have anything negative to say at the moment. although i think your last thing i fed was better than this one. it's still good tho.

[SajN]

Thanks for checking it out man

The verse is finished, so this is only the 2/3 of it.

And it's coming soon on audio