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Rain Inside Tha Matrix

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 4th, '08, 00:44

tha rap world wants me to be Angry I'm peacefull it just Can't Be
life is better without tha Damn Beef go home and embrace yur Family
I'll gladly take what today Hands Me it's 4:20 and I have a Crammed Piece
I won't bow down to tha Judgement only god has that power and I Love This
every rhyme I take time to Crush With faking has never been in my Budget
I'm no king but I'm loyal to my Subjects last I knew reality could be Trusted
so I don't distort facts or hold Grudges I'm just real on tha mic whenever I Touch It
our culture plunders all Innocence so that makes us all guilty In A Sense
we only censor what we don't Comprehend dismissing valid points that tha Stong Defend
up untill their very Last Breath we all die to young to ever Have Stress
swept into tha patriot acts Dragnet so homeland security can Snag Checks
their propaganda still gives me a Migraine so it's always avoided by my Sly Brain
I'm refusing to let myself Die Vain so I'll stay true till god calls My Name
if tha clouds part we can't Change Now so say a prayer for wherever Pains Found
when we achieve equality we Gain Ground untill that day happens send tha Rain Down
bring hope to tha many Drying Roots were tha people who are they Lying To
they tell us everything is Flying Smooth for them but what about tha Dying Truth
they'll sell their lies maybe Buying U putting their stock in tha future by Guiding Youth
their tomorrow goes against tha Predictions their form of government calls for Revisions
u think they'll Be Risking these Systems not me but u make yur own Decisions
we have become oblivious to Humanity their reports are designed to make u Lose Sanity
burdened evermore as tha Dice Rolls then burdened again when tha Price Grows
scripting daily events Like Shows cuz it's easier to program Psycho's
rappers talk about Homicides On Tha Ride what for none of us really Wants Ta Die
it's hard to look at life when yur Traumatized so thats why everything gets Dramatized
disguising tha taxes that just Took Ya Pay u can't say nothing so have to Look Away
from tha face of our so called Republic as they ignore tha constituion We Published
waiting for tha battles to finally Unfold power gives them tha illusion of Control
do they even realize that it takes A Toll when they cause tha interest rates Ta Grow
one consequence undervalue Brings Forth when there's money problems they just Print More
if we did that there'd be a Sound Verdict who delegated them tha right to Counterfit
try not having money it'll take All Yur Will they want us to be slaves to tha Dollar Bill
it's a manipulation tactic and Nothing More how are we terrorists yur tha one Funding War
I'm just making music for Raps Fans throwing out my thoughts throughout this Vast Land
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Re: Rain Inside Tha Matrix

Postby Robbie G » Apr 4th, '08, 00:49

Thats pretty sick dude, I loved it :worship:
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Re: Rain Inside Tha Matrix

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 4th, '08, 20:50

this was a pretty simple rhyme scheme for me

how do we deal with tha problems we can't Balance
they can sign murderers but not someone with Talent

thats how I feel... my lyrics are good... and I'll catch up to them believe that
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Re: Rain Inside Tha Matrix

Postby Xplode » Apr 5th, '08, 10:57

woah tat was big one nice work Rain :) :y:
So Long Bitch U Did Me So Wrong
I Dont Want To Go On
Living In This World Without
You...........
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Re: Rain Inside Tha Matrix

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 5th, '08, 13:42

Chet wrote:
Rain Matrix wrote:this was a pretty simple rhyme scheme for me

how do we deal with tha problems we can't Balance
they can sign murderers but not someone with Talent

thats how I feel... my lyrics are good... and I'll catch up to them believe that


ok then man, but it's gonna take a while :smoking:


I'm not going anywhere playboy... so why don't u sanp yur fingers or lean back or something :whistle:
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Re: Rain Inside Tha Matrix

Postby Sleepy » Apr 5th, '08, 13:45

Shady Babie wrote:Thats pretty sick dude, I loved it :worship:
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Re: Rain Inside Tha Matrix

Postby Arabian Shady » Apr 5th, '08, 14:25

damn dude :confusion: ,i feel confunded,i havnt stared at the screen for such a long time-ever!
but the drop was wiked,no doubt,its the type wen u sit ur ass down n just think n think n then covert it into a rhyme n then quikly jot it down,stait from the heart
sick shit-congrats at keepin it real :y:
peace :b:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: Rain Inside Tha Matrix

Postby Tash8 » Apr 7th, '08, 04:35

everything was great besides the flow, i didn't follow any flow to it honestly, and it had more of tongue twisting than a flow.
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