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Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 12th, '08, 00:26

My words are sincere in ears when I sin here but win tears cause I'm in weird
Science and the violence is sounded by sirens vibrant lights shinning
I'm climbin' a tree hiding and rhyming about big foot sightings
describing him as exciting but lieing at the same time crying cause
I just realized that I'm dying from the time when I was born
I got a horn and I toot it useless using soothing music if it don't groove with
My moves behooving but be who him if I tune in to him and use him to
zoom in on some ass I've been waitin for for the past eight or more
years I've been chasin her mentally maken her into everything I'm achin for
beg-ignored bacon on it's way major cords bein ripped for gore
escapin tour cause I aint made it that far fore hole in one I'm holdin guns
Thinkin I was chosen mums the word I come from heard I'm one with birth
And sun the earth

I got A.D.D so keep that trap shut about not stayin on track
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Re: Look at this

Postby jigglinj » Apr 12th, '08, 02:37

i have a.d.d. too, but thats cool lyrics yo :y:
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Postby shady6 » Apr 12th, '08, 06:57

Chet wrote:you need to stay on track :whistle:
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Check out my Soundcloud! I make my own unique blend of progressive electronic music: http://soundcloud.com/zakk-golz
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Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 12th, '08, 14:57

yur switchovers would have conveyed over better on audio but I've seen worse
yur rhyming was pretty good actually :y:
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Re: Look at this

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 12th, '08, 15:58

thank you everybody.
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