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Practicing Flow

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 12th, '08, 21:09

sometimes it feels like tha war is at Home
it seems I'm battling more now that I've Grown

I'd say fuck money even if I could get my Own
if I could have anything I'd invest in a Clone

to do what I love when I'm off getting Stoned
so people wouldn't know me wherever I Roamed

I come in peace I'm not strapped with any Chrome
my methodic thoughts rip my flesh from my Bone

I'm a shell of a man who's cover has been Blown
maybe I'm just destined to go at this all Alone

feeling a void in myself that's surely Emptyness
now u know tha very reason that this MC Spits

if u lack motivation or cash u Better Treasure Dreams
I'm deciduous besides bud my focus is Never Ever Green

I set tha Facts Free this world keeps getting At Me
now I'm gonna be a Daddy not much else makes me Happy

a voice says is ya Purpose ta Word This Perfect
for tha Circus no time to be Nervous Merc It
if guilty is tha Verdict I'll find a Worship Service
it's not Worthless if u Serve With Yur Gift
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Re: Practicing Flow

Postby Steve Spag » Apr 13th, '08, 07:50

Rain Matrix wrote:sometimes it feels like tha war is at Home
it seems I'm battling more now that I've Grown

I'd say fuck money even if I could get my Own
if I could have anything I'd invest in a Clone

to do what I love when I'm off getting Stoned
so people wouldn't know me wherever I Roamed


SOOOOO fuckin' dope dude. Those bars were nuts and I relate to that shit. So keep it up brotha.
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Re: Practicing Flow

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 14th, '08, 15:24

thanks man this will be recorded I'm just waiting for tha oppurtunity to present itself

thanks again... trshady 4 life!
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Re: Practicing Flow

Postby Arabian Shady » Apr 14th, '08, 18:38

damn bro! that was amazing
exellent,the opening lines were exotic man,one of a kind,
sick shit

feeling a void in myself that's surely Emptyness
now u know tha very reason that this MC Spits

if u lack motivation or cash u Better Treasure Dreams
I'm deciduous besides bud my focus is Never Ever Green


1 of my fav. parts!!

peace
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: Practicing Flow

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 16th, '08, 03:32

recorded and posted on tha audio stage as "Tha Dragon Verse"
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