The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

Whaaa...

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

Whaaa...

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 17th, '08, 04:54

I Should Write To Fight Thru Nights Fools Snipe Who's Tight
we won't Duel Twice Move Like Dude's Mics is a True Light

in a Dark Place feel yur Heart Ache for Our Race as we Guard Hate
killing is a Hard Way to Start Pace for peace sometime this Star Date

Technology Gets All Of Me so when are u going to Beam Me Up Scotty
to a Foreign Time no Boring Rhymes I had a Dream These Fucks Got Me

it Makes Sense we Pay Them to watch Safe End in our Nation
politicans Play Friends but we're aware where have They Been

I Have Skill Past and Ill I'm tipping tha scales like when yur Gas Fills
this Math Kills freedom needs Advil when congress starts to Pass Bills

at least we won't Lack Pills my tolerance is At Nil for Cracks Thrill
my Rap Will let tha Facts Spill they want tha oil under that Iraq Drill
Last edited by Rain Matrix on Apr 17th, '08, 16:13, edited 1 time in total.
User avatar
Rain Matrix
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1967
Joined: Oct 6th, '06, 21:25
Location: In that mirage you saw.
Gender: Male

Re: Bringing Back Complexity

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 17th, '08, 05:19

wow that shit was simple as fuck...complexity?? shit man back to the drawin board..
0/10
Sticcy Z
Prison in Febuary, i don't give no fuckkssss
Image
Saten is here
User avatar
<Stiiccy>
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3386
Joined: Dec 28th, '07, 14:48
Location: United States bitch
Gender: Male

Re: Bringing Back Complexity

Postby Marsh devileny » Apr 17th, '08, 12:53

Yo if anything that ant complex :n: I think you could do better just spend a little more time writing dude
Music = Power... We Use It To Manipulate, We Do Not Apologize! view my music here - http://www.bebo.com/Devilville
Marsh devileny
Closet Cleaner
Closet Cleaner
 
Posts: 41
Joined: Apr 11th, '08, 18:29
Location: Ireland
Gender: Male

Re: Whaa...

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 17th, '08, 16:12

hate then go on with it... damn...
User avatar
Rain Matrix
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1967
Joined: Oct 6th, '06, 21:25
Location: In that mirage you saw.
Gender: Male

Re: Whaaa...

Postby Arabian Shady » Apr 18th, '08, 10:36

@ dumb fuks: wid post numbers of 212 and 19, u have no idea how complex this guys verses can get.!

i do agrre at thhe fact that you could have put in a lil more effort cause wid the sick shit u've been puttin out ppl expect a whole lot more man,this was indeed AVERAGE
try improvin the flow n be a lil verbostrous-thats my advice
keep postin dude
peace :b:
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
User avatar
Arabian Shady
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2953
Joined: Jul 17th, '06, 13:03
Location: 'DeM SaNd DuNeS... DUBAI!!
Gender: Male

Re: Whaaa...

Postby Marsh devileny » Apr 18th, '08, 11:58

Well if your so confidant about the complexity show me some of your work... you got soundclick? I'm not hating on the guy all i said was it's not that complex though cuz i only have 19 post's (Now 20) i must have no idea what im the hell I'm talking about LMAO! you have got to be kidding me for real see that wee link below… why don't click it and come tell me i don't know what im talking about then :tounge2:
Music = Power... We Use It To Manipulate, We Do Not Apologize! view my music here - http://www.bebo.com/Devilville
Marsh devileny
Closet Cleaner
Closet Cleaner
 
Posts: 41
Joined: Apr 11th, '08, 18:29
Location: Ireland
Gender: Male

Re: Whaaa...

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 18th, '08, 12:10

Arabian Shady wrote:@ dumb fuks: wid post numbers of 212 and 19, u have no idea how complex this guys verses can get.!

i do agrre at thhe fact that you could have put in a lil more effort cause wid the sick shit u've been puttin out ppl expect a whole lot more man,this was indeed AVERAGE
try improvin the flow n be a lil verbostrous-thats my advice
keep postin dude
peace :b:

lol so your saying that i dont know what complexity is just because of my post numbers?
lol bro i have somthing called a life and i dont stay on the internet all day...
but if you think that wack shit like this is good then more power to ya...
go buy the dudes albums and shit see how much i care :tounge2:
Sticcy Z
Prison in Febuary, i don't give no fuckkssss
Image
Saten is here
User avatar
<Stiiccy>
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3386
Joined: Dec 28th, '07, 14:48
Location: United States bitch
Gender: Male

Re: Whaaa...

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 18th, '08, 15:41

Marsh devileny wrote:Well if your so confidant about the complexity show me some of your work... you got soundclick? I'm not hating on the guy all i said was it's not that complex though cuz i only have 19 post's (Now 20) i must have no idea what im the hell I'm talking about LMAO! you have got to be kidding me for real see that wee link below… why don't click it and come tell me i don't know what im talking about then :tounge2:


What tha fuck was tha link supposed to prove... if u wanna take down a writer like me

use yur "pen and pad" and do it with skill cuz running yur mouth amounts to nothing
User avatar
Rain Matrix
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1967
Joined: Oct 6th, '06, 21:25
Location: In that mirage you saw.
Gender: Male

Re: Whaaa...

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 18th, '08, 16:39

actually put a diss track out on me and see how far that gets ya!!! playboy :boxing:
User avatar
Rain Matrix
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1967
Joined: Oct 6th, '06, 21:25
Location: In that mirage you saw.
Gender: Male

Re: Whaaa...

Postby Marsh devileny » Apr 18th, '08, 17:14

Diss you? LMFAO grow up you child that’s lycril execution, if you want beef go to the blucher’s though I’ma give you a tip any way’s next time someone give’s you contusive criticism take it like man and use it to your advance, last but not least don’t ever call me playboy you sound’s like so dirty uncle :confusion:

Edit

Dude Just went on your myspace... and you are just about the worst rapper ive ever heard lol
Music = Power... We Use It To Manipulate, We Do Not Apologize! view my music here - http://www.bebo.com/Devilville
Marsh devileny
Closet Cleaner
Closet Cleaner
 
Posts: 41
Joined: Apr 11th, '08, 18:29
Location: Ireland
Gender: Male

Re: Whaaa...

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 18th, '08, 17:34

go on then be afraid... load yur airsoft gun and make it rain with yur foodstamps
yeah I checked out yur music page too... u emulate eminem completly u tool

if u don't like my rap... stay tha fuck away from it I don't spit for stans like u
User avatar
Rain Matrix
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1967
Joined: Oct 6th, '06, 21:25
Location: In that mirage you saw.
Gender: Male

Re: Whaaa...

Postby Arabian Shady » Apr 18th, '08, 19:02

the post count comment was a reference to ur history on TR,not at you both as rappers

@ MArsh:u joined april 17 of this year,can u honestly say that u've read all of rains posts?? i doubt that :smoking:
@sticcy: ^^ well now u know wat i meant so..... :8)

peace :b:
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
User avatar
Arabian Shady
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2953
Joined: Jul 17th, '06, 13:03
Location: 'DeM SaNd DuNeS... DUBAI!!
Gender: Male

Re: Whaaa...

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 18th, '08, 19:06

thanks for all tha feed... I'd appreciate if this was locked
I'm sorry I lowered myself to that cats level... forgive me TR

I called him out it's on him now...
User avatar
Rain Matrix
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1967
Joined: Oct 6th, '06, 21:25
Location: In that mirage you saw.
Gender: Male

Re: Whaaa...

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 18th, '08, 19:11

Dope shit man! I liked it a lot! :y:
Image
Kickin' Incredibly Dope Shit
User avatar
Jay-19
Band Leader
Band Leader
 
Posts: 5708
Joined: Jun 17th, '05, 00:00
Location: Sweeden
Gender: Male

Re: Whaaa...

Postby Arabian Shady » Apr 18th, '08, 19:16

Chet wrote:Ok so now lets cut this bullshit out



hell yeah :smoking:
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
User avatar
Arabian Shady
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2953
Joined: Jul 17th, '06, 13:03
Location: 'DeM SaNd DuNeS... DUBAI!!
Gender: Male

Next

Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users