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Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 19th, '08, 04:23

Ayo
Ima true author
A real dealer
I'm makin it father
Hes a true failure
was once a Prisoner
My anger caused danger
Im openin a new chapter
This is my little corner
Imagine loosin a daughter
was different called a creature
Doin anythin for a dollar
was eager and yet dumber
Breathin through a filter
livin in a fuckin gutter
It was fuckin horror
She grew up now a hooker
Landed in a seizure
Gettin really sicker
Lifes endin sooner
Now theres no tourter
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Re: freestyle

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 19th, '08, 19:16

cant be that bad :unsure:
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Re: freestyle

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 20th, '08, 17:51

dot dot dot
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Re: freestyle

Postby -[Zach]- » Apr 21st, '08, 04:23

not bad...pretty good for a freestyle :y:
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

FREE SPM!
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Re: freestyle

Postby stevethetruth » Apr 21st, '08, 20:25

great piece :y:
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Re: freestyle

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 22nd, '08, 05:22

thanks
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