5 bars

[<VerbalTouch>]

free write

A place from the ghetto where we keep it melo
A place from no Ho skippin school wasa bit coo
They use ta call me ghoul Till started a car-pool
I was uncool Til I said fuck you now I kinda rule
I aint bein used as a footstool I'm kind of cruel
Teachers say I was rude only cause I tore her
I'll take it to tha roots Till it fuckin computes
Till it suites I'm startin tributes and lawsuits
I'll crush you wit my boots its just a routine
I rumored those rumors I'll leave ys in ruins

[<VerbalTouch>]

K 30 views im guessin it was bad?

[Robbie G]

I didn't love it, but you had some nice lines.

[-[Zach]-]

not bad for a free write...good job

[<VerbalTouch>]

rhanks

[Rain Matrix]

yur getting better keep doing these keystyle exercises

[Solace]

Nice im not sure what the term is but i like how there are 2 rhymes in one line, like the first sentence "A place from the GHETTO where we keep it MELO"

[<VerbalTouch>]

Thanks