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[Emadyville]

Wrote this when I was mad at some chick, just found it, thought I'd see what you all think?

Her pace-dull, so she has a face-full,
Of another guy being ungrateful,
Being unfaithful, so when the lace-pull,
On the shoes she moves acting irreplaceable,
Makes me laugh, takes me back, I could break in half,
Her face I mistake for her face in that place and act,
Like I didn't see it coming, running for the next stunning,
Half-wit, toothpick, ruthless chick who is becoming,
I've been played and it's played out,
I now know when to stay out,
Relationships a job so it makes sense if you work me,
But if I ain't being a dick you have no reason to jerk me,
It happens so often but I refuse to soften,
I've been bruised enough I could use a coffin,
Caughin up flem when I'm jockin on them
Hip-hoppin again when I'm rockin a pen,
It's so easy so it please me if they tease me,
It's ok for Weezy but not me believe me,
The wordplay kills them, the metaphor kills them,
Studio time I bill them call me a dick I'll fill them,
Get a video out I won't pay one to film them,
I'm chillen, cause in the end we still men,
And it's just a flow-so, no-no to the so-so,
I'm a pro-so, hoe-go I'm flying solo,
You can't stop-it, I don't need a topic,
Cause when I drop-it I'm as hot as tropic,
I'm clear as optic, while you flop-quick,
I'm drastic when I practice this hip-hop shit,
So my words of wisdom, if you say the kid-dumb,
I could write much worse until your face is-numb...

[Solace]

i really like it man, i like how emotional it is. also some parts are funny like the last 2 lines

[Emadyville]

Thanks man, appreciate it.

[Dark Blue]

wow lol i gotta say that was very good...if u got a mic u should rap it and upload it here i would like to here it btw i liked when u said (Relationships a job so it makes sense if you work me,
But if I ain't being a dick you have no reason to jerk me)

[Dark Blue]

and by the way where r u from

[Emadyville]

Catasauqua Pennsylvania

[Dark Blue]

wow thats far away haha

[Emadyville]

I guess if you're in Canada

[-[Zach]-]

damn man. i loved this right here. very smart in a humorous and real way. very good job