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with you Forever

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 28th, '08, 06:05

Immortal technique Tought me somethin dance with the devil
Was my true angle Most my couples left me cause they cycled

I was facin the council While prayin to the devil
Wonderin if I'm able I dont wanna see the dental
because he makes fun of my freckles
fickle this I gotta be fuckin fateful
Gotta be graceful I want them fuels
My dads death hold it off put it on idle
You see he was my true idol I aint able
To earn a medal "Dont be put in the middle"
Was his last words Ima do it Ima be legal
Excusin the fact teachers say I'm mental
I wont be personal Ima be fuckin peaceful
I'll take this pencil and speak to the people
But they step on me like Im a fuckin puddle
i'm still lookin for that portal sick of racial slurs
Feel like im playin scramble puttin words together
Startin to crush rivals All you did was scribble
Rest in peace father Ima be with you Forever
Your death was last december Ima be with you
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Re: with you Forever

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 29th, '08, 00:46

Thanks I was feelin emo when i wrote this :laughing:
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Re: with you Forever

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 29th, '08, 04:33

Uppin :y:
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Re: with you Forever

Postby -[Zach]- » Apr 29th, '08, 06:38

very touching. i feel the raw emotion in it. i like that. it wasn't the best lyrically but emotionally it was dead on and perfect. very good :y:
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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Re: with you Forever

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 29th, '08, 08:28

Thaks Man :y:
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Re: with you Forever

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 29th, '08, 17:06

it good to get this sorta thing out... good job man

my cuz recently killed himself
too much evil surrounds peacefull souls
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Re: with you Forever

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 29th, '08, 21:26

Rain Matrix wrote:it good to get this sorta thing out... good job man

my cuz recently killed himself
too much evil surrounds peacefull souls



Thanks homie and sorry to hear bout that this is one of the reasons why I do rap
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Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 30th, '08, 22:27

:y:
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