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Verse I Keystyled

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 28th, '08, 15:41

time ta go Off To Impact metaphors Saw U In Half
like whiskey Soft Dudes Bring Jack yur mad cuz I Got Thru Intact
now a days modern Warfare ripping us up like More Tears
breathless trying to Score Air greedy fucks wanna Hoard Theirs
but this money Means Nothing propaganda has Teens Jumping
over ledges that Dream Sunk In were taking dope if Greens Coming
patronize those who've Seen Something probably been Sentanced
so tha rest stay Relentless or u'll steal our Defenses
especially Demented there's there's only Peace In My Eyes
chemtrails Treasons Drive By our freedoms Recent Demise
Americans aren't Fascist new world order whats tha Passage
trying to herd tha Masses chips in tha skin to Track With
u better hope tha Track Skips why's civil rights Clapped Quick
come for me and it's Snap Click nah u won't see my Rap Miss
that's cuz I destroy Wack Shit so fire up a Fat Spliff
revolutions freedoms Last Wish what happened in our Past kid
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Re: Verse I Keystyled

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 28th, '08, 19:23

preety good man...gettin more complex good job :y:
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Re: Verse I Keystyled

Postby -[Zach]- » Apr 29th, '08, 06:44

incredible...especially for a keystyle...you got crazy skills man. deep thoughts in here. i like that. very good job :y:
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

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