Short verse from a song i'm putting together

[Robbie G]

started out with shit, working my way up
didn't have a pot to piss in, I used a cup
Don't try to tell me you ain't changed by your envirement
coming up worried, wondering about your retirement
this is real, I'm not lying
I can't feel, too many people dying
around me and they can't eat
hungry and cold living on the street
how can we change this and help the penniless
we all try in life, but it's just a game of chess
Pawns and rooks, cops and crooks
Some go for the books, some go for the looks
but it's all the same, hope and dreams
caught up in ourselves, we can't hear the screams

[Emadyville]

Not bad, environment/retirement rhyme was nice. This was your best lines tho

Pawns and rooks, cops and crooks
Some go for the books, some go for the looks

[Robbie G]

Thanks, I wrote that pretty quick so i'll probably go back later and add in/remove some lines.

[-[Zach]-]

damn man. i thought that was pretty damn good. those last 4 lines were the best in my opinon. very real words. very good job

[Dark Blue]

put the song together haha

[Rain Matrix]

I agree put this piece together
I wanna see tha final product if u will