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It Came To Me Too

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It Came To Me Too

Postby Ka0t1c » Apr 30th, '08, 02:34

it came to me too and it wasnt a dream
i really could feel the evil from beneath coming thru
something new at the scene had proceeded and grew
then my duty to lead seemed very true, i had to move
my instincts were to prove i wouldnt sink, i'd remove this link barely viewed
but people think consumed within me is a disease and that fuels
my reasons to tune easily to the room to cease the non believers, conceited and rude
but reachin, i lose cuz when im speakin, the clues weaken, you're bringin the tools
to defeat by deletin our meetin that's due, between we, the angels the keepers of who
deeply do choose to bleed to debut, so a median is used, by breathin i lose
to each demon immune to even me dude, but still peace isn't doomed


holy shit that fuckin is freaky...!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: It Came To Me Too

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 30th, '08, 16:00

great job... tha truth is there if we wish to find it :y:
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