My compiled freestyle

[Solace]

Here i compiled some lines from my like 4 freestyles (on a different page), and i think they are the best (that IVE done). So this isnt really a freestyle, i just used lines from my other freestyles. also dont say i suck, because ive just started

hey, didnt you hear what i said?
maybe youd listen better if you stopped giving head
so bitch, gimme a large container of pills
because you know im crazier than people on Dr. Phil
but my cranium is still bigger than a dozen football arenas
bigger than the balls of my haters
you think i stink, so you better rethink
because you smell nastier than a dead mink
i opened up your moms vault, i made an assault
and after 12 hours of fun i had to hault
and now uve got a new brother and its all my fault
now as i stop this rap attempt
i just wanna tell you to go get bent.

[Darkblade44431]

The lyrics werent very good. And there wasnt any flow.
Just try working on that for now.