The Way I Am
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The Way I Am
by Twiz » May 2nd, '08, 18:44
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Re: The Way I Am
by Emadyville » May 2nd, '08, 18:50
Interesting to say the least
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Re: The Way I Am
by Dark Blue » May 2nd, '08, 18:52
ooo i like it do another one haha
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Re: The Way I Am
by Solace » May 2nd, '08, 21:48
yea its more of a freeverse poem. good job. i liked it anyway. 
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Re: The Way I Am
by Tash8 » May 3rd, '08, 02:44
it's not a poem or a verse, it's not good either...
no flow, kinda corny, rhymes are simple, the topic was confusing, from beginning to end it went no where....
no flow, kinda corny, rhymes are simple, the topic was confusing, from beginning to end it went no where....
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Re: The Way I Am
by Xray » May 3rd, '08, 02:47
Tash8 wrote:it's not a poem or a verse, it's not good either...
no flow, kinda corny, rhymes are simple, the topic was confusing, from beginning to end it went no where....
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Re: The Way I Am
by -[Zach]- » May 3rd, '08, 05:08
like Emadyville said it was interesting. i thought it was pretty good though. it was you being you and telling how you feel and you can't be wrong about that. but like Tash8 said it was a little confusing. all in al though it was decent. keep it up 
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